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1、1.【安徽省六校教育研究会2018届高三第二次联考】网络时代，许多年轻的父母沉溺于玩手机或电脑，而忽视了与孩子的沟通。某英文报社现以Howtodevelopabetterparent-childrelationship为题向你征稿。请你分析产生这种现象的原因并提出合理化建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。Howtodevelopabetterparent-childrelationshipNowadaysmanyyoungparentsareaddictedto

2、theirelectricdeviceslikesmartphonesorcomputers,payinglessornoattentiontotheirkids.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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5、erparent-childrelationshipNowadaysmanyyoungparentsareaddictedtotheirelectricdeviceslikesmartphonesorcomputers,payinglessornoattentiontotheirkids.Thenhowdoesitcomeabout?Admittedly,thesmartphoneindeeddramaticallychangesourlife.Withit,peoplecandonearlyeverythingtheywant,

6、suchassurfingtheInternetforinformation,watchingfilmsorvideos,doingsomeonlineshoppingandplayinggamesaswell.Thus,asmartphoneservesasaplatformforthemtogetfuninacomfortableandconvenientway.Asaresult,moreandmoreyoungparentsarebeingattracted.However,nothingcanreplaceface-to

7、-facecommunicationbetweenparentsandkids,whichrequiresparentstothinkabouttherealmeaningoflife,spendmoretimewiththechildrenandsharethefuntogether.Onlyinthiswaycanabetterparent-childrelationshipbedeveloped.【解析】这是一篇半开放性作文。该文应该分为三大部分。第一部分描述年轻父母玩手机，忽略和孩【亮点分析】1.所给范文要点齐全，条理清楚

8、。thus,asaresult,however等词的使用使得上下文自然通畅。2.长短句结合，简单句复杂句共用。充分利用高级句式。定语从句（peoplecandonearlyeverythingtheywant，whichrequiresparent