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1、中考英语作文常见的错误清单1.审题错误英语书面表达的审题十分重要。审题包括此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。由于英语书面表达的篇幅很有限,所以要求学生在写作时要精心组织材料,紧扣主题。不要产生偏题或者漏掉重要信息等问题。 【例文】：蒙山是山东著名的游览胜地，一年四季都有其独特的景色(scene)。尤其春天的景色更加迷人。每当春天来临,青山滴翠,美丽的景色吸引了许多游客前来踏青观光。可最近几年,游人不注意保护环境,乱扔垃圾,攀折树枝花草,,点火野餐,致使自然环境遭到破坏。请你写篇报道,说明蒙
2、山旅游环境的变化，号召人们文明旅游，保护生态环境。【学生习作】：MengshanMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShandongProvince.Ithasitsspecialscenesalltheyearround,especiallyinspring.Whenspringcomes,thedaysgetlongerandlongerandtheweathergetwarmerandwarmer.Treesarebeginningtoturngreen,andallkindsof
3、beautifulflowerscomeout.Everythingbeginstogrow. Themountainsarecoveredwithalotofgreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butinrecentyears,someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontoprotectingtheenvi
4、ronment.Theythrewlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Theydon’tknowthatcleanersworkfrommorningtillnighttosweepawaytherubbishandwastethings.Sometimestheybrokesomebranches,pickedflowersandevenkilledbirds.Someevenmadefiresintheforesttoc
5、ookfood.Howdangerousitwas!Luckily,thelocalgovernmenthasbeguntodosomethingtostoppollutingthearea.Greatchangeshavetakenplacehere.Newroadsandnicehotelshavebeenbuilt;treesandflowersareplantedaroundthem.Ihopeallthevisitorscankeeptheideainmindthatweshouldprotecttheenv
6、ironment.【问题分析】：这就是属于审题不清，文章的中心偏离了主题。文章应围绕蒙山环境状况变化以及环境保护主题展开,与蒙山有关的春天的景色可以略写,但不宜用太多的笔墨去描绘春天的风景,这样就会冲淡主题。所以文章的第一段应该简写。同样在第二段中也没有必要去谈论清洁工是如何清理这些垃圾的，也没有必要谈论新的宾馆的建设及修路等情况，第二段的最后一句也应去掉，与主题无关。【精彩例文】：MengshanMountainisafamousplaceofinterestinShandongProvince.Ithasitssp
7、ecialscenesalltheyearround,especiallyinspring.Whenspringcomes,themountainsarecoveredwithalotofgreentalltreesandallkindsofcolorfulwildflowers.Itissobeautifulthatalotofvisitorscomehereandenjoyitsbeautyeveryday.Butinrecentyears,someofthevisitorspaidnoattentiontopro
8、tectingtheenvironment.Theythrewlotsofrubbishsuchasplasticbags,fruitskinsandwastepaperontheground.Sometimestheybrokesomebranches,pickedflowersandevenkilledbirds.Someev
