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1、小学英语作文辅导(精选多篇)第一篇：英语作文辅导奖题目：mybestfriend扶沟县秋实高级中学三．3班陈军宇辅导老师：王倩楠mybestfriendliyan,mybestfriend,ismyclassmate.shehasbigeyes.herlonghairisoftenplained.sweetsmileisoftenonherface,makeshermorelively.liyanisveryclever.sheisgoodatherschoolsubjects.shehaswontheschool
2、scholarshiptwice,ialwaystakeherasmymodelinstudy.shetellsmethatweshouldmakegooduseoftime.liyaniskind-heartedandisalwaysreadytohelpingothers.anystudentinmyclasswhohastroubleinstudylikesaskingherforhelp.shedoesn＇tlikeotherstopraiseher,becauseshethinkswhatshedidis
3、ordinary.ifeelproudtohavesuchafriend.评语：本文第一段第二行中that改为which,因为在此用which引导非限制性定语从句。第二段第一行中has改为had,因为两次获得奖学金应该用过去完成时态。第三段中helping改为help,小学英语作文辅导(精选多篇)第一篇：英语作文辅导奖题目：mybestfriend扶沟县秋实高级中学三．3班陈军宇辅导老师：王倩楠mybestfriendliyan,mybestfriend,ismyclassmate.shehasbigeyes.he
4、rlonghairisoftenplained.sweetsmileisoftenonherface,makeshermorelively.liyanisveryclever.sheisgoodatherschoolsubjects.shehaswontheschoolscholarshiptwice,ialwaystakeherasmymodelinstudy.shetellsmethatweshouldmakegooduseoftime.liyaniskind-heartedandisalwaysreadyto
5、helpingothers.anystudentinmyclasswhohastroubleinstudylikesaskingherforhelp.shedoesn＇tlikeotherstopraiseher,becauseshethinkswhatshedidisordinary.ifeelproudtohavesuchafriend.评语：本文第一段第二行中that改为which,因为在此用which引导非限制性定语从句。第二段第一行中has改为had,因为两次获得奖学金应该用过去完成时态。第三段中help
6、ing改为help,因为之前的to为动词不定式后应用动词原形。第三段第二行中so改为but,因为联系上下文句意在此应表转折。本文简述我的一位最好的朋友李燕，从她的外貌，学习和人际交往方面展开描述。李燕不但长的漂亮，而且学习优秀，两次获得奖学金，是我学习的典范。另外她心地善良，非常乐于助人，为人谦虚谨慎。本文语句结构精确且用词精炼优美，主题突出，不失一篇经典之作。第二篇：2014英语中考作文辅导2014英语中考作文辅导1、手机利与弊recently,shortmessagesbecomemoreandmorepopu
7、larwithboththeyoungandtheold.peopleaccepttheconvenientwayofcommunicationandsomeevencannotlivewithoutthem.astotheeasonswhysomanypeopleareinfavouroftheshortmessages,inmyopinion,there’rethreepoints.first,itcansavetimeifyouwanttoinformyourfriendsofsomethinginoneor
8、twowordsbysendingashortmessage.bycomparisonwithlettersoremail,shortmessagesarereallymorequickforotherstoreceiveyouasthemobilephonesarealwayswiththem.second,shortmessagescostlesstha
