xx年考研英语写作指导及范文(一)

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1、XX年考研英语写作指导及范文（一）Forthispart,youareallowedtowriteashortessay.Youshouldwriteatleastl50wordsbasedonthechartandoutlinegivenbelow：1.近十年来X市越来越多的人选择出境旅游2.出现这种现象的原因3.这种现象可能产生的影响原文TravelingabroadThenumberofpeopleinXcitywhoprefertravelingabroadhasbeengrowinglargerandlar

2、gerinthepastlOyears.Inl995thenumberwasonlymorethanl0,OOOanditgrewtoabout40，OOOinXX.Butitchangedgreatlytoalmost130,000inXX.Ithinkoneofthereasonsforthechangesmaybethedevelopingeconomy.Sincepeoplemakemoremoneynow,theycanaffordforsuchatraveling.Andthentheyarebecomi

3、ngmoreandmorewillingtostudymoreabouttheworid.Travelingabroadcanhelptobroadentheirhorizonstoachievethegoal.Itcanalsoprovideadifferentsceneabroadfromtheonesathome.Thelastreasonisthatpeoplewanttorelaxthemselvesandliveabetterlife.Whateffectscanitbringabout?0nonehan

4、d,itcanmakethecitymorebeautiful.Peoplegetalotfromtravelingabroadandcangivesuggestiononthecitysconstruction.Itcanalsomakeforeignersknowmorea.boutthecityandgivethecitymorechance.Ontheotherhand,ifmorepeopletravelabroad,itwillbeharmfultothelocaltravelingcompanies.I

5、naway,sinceeverymatterhasitstwosides,wemustconsideritcarefully点评这篇作文写得还可以，达到大学英语六级写作的起码要求。考试指令要求的几个方面都写到了，表达思想比较清楚，文字亦基本连贯。该考生对语法结构的掌握比较好，通篇没有大的语法错误。缺点是作者的思维不够严密，有些地方语言表达比较模糊，建议该考生下笔之前先把问题想清楚，写的时候注意上下文的逻辑关系，尽量多用具体的、特定的词。下面是几点修改意见。1.第一段第二句Inl995thenumberwasonlym

6、orethanl0，OOOanditgrewtoabout40,OOOinXX建议改为修改后的文章中的形式。morethanl0，000给读者的印象是作者要表达多的意思，而在这个上下文中，显然10，000与其后的增长来比是少而不是多。第三句Butitchangedgreatlytoalmostl30,000建议改为Butitrosesharplytoalmostl30,OOOinXX.Change意为变化，改为rosesharply（猛增），作者的观点就变得鲜明了。2•第二段第二句中的theycanaffordfor

7、suchatraveling可改为theycanaffordsuchaluxury.afford为及物动词，直接接宾语，例如：I’msobusy,Icanrarelyaffordtheluxuryofarestfulweekend.另夕卜，traveling是个动名词，一般不可数，因此要改成suchatour，或更加鲜明一点，改成suchaluxury.3.第二段第三句Andthentheyarebecomingmoreandmorewillingtostudymoreabouttheworld可以改为Andwith

8、theopeningupofChina,theyarebecomingmoreeagertolearnabouttheoutsideworld.Study意为学习、研究，而这里是想了解，该用learnabout.接下去第四和第五句Travelingabroadcanhelptobroadentheirhorizonstoachievethego