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2、ionofreplicatesandstatisticalmethodsusedinthestudy.◆Furthermore,anexplanationofwhytheauthorsdidthesevariousexperimentsshouldbeprovided.3、对于研究设计的rationale:Also,therearefewexplanationsoftherationaleforthestudydesign.4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨:Theconclusionsareoverstated.Forexample,thestu
3、dydidnotshowifthesideeffectsfrominitialcopperburstcanbeavoidwiththepolymerformulation.1、目标和结果不清晰。ItisnotedthatyourmanuscriptneedscarefuleditingbysomeonewithexpertiseintechnicalEnglisheditingpayingparticularattentiontoEnglishgrammar,spelling,andsentencestructuresothatthegoalsand
4、resultsofthestudyarecleartothereader.2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。◆Ingeneral,thereisalackofexplanationofreplicatesandstatisticalmethodsusedinthestudy.◆Furthermore,anexplanationofwhytheauthorsdidthesevariousexperimentsshouldbeprovided.3、对于研究设计的rationale:Also,therearefewexplanationsoftheratio
5、naleforthestudydesign.4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨:Theconclusionsareoverstated.Forexample,thestudydidnotshowifthesideeffectsfrominitialcopperburstcanbeavoidwiththepolymerformulation.5、对hypothesis的清晰界定:Ahypothesisneedstobepresented。6、对某个概念或工具使用的rationale/定义概念:Whatwastherationaleforthefilm
6、/SBFvolumeratio?7、对研究问题的定义:Trytosettheproblemdiscussedinthispaperinmoreclear,writeonesectiontodefinetheproblem8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写literaturereview:Thetopicisnovelbuttheapplicationproposedisnotsonovel.9、对claim,如A>B的证明,verification:Thereisnoexperimentalcomparisonofthealgorithmwithpr
7、eviouslyknownwork,soitisimpossibletojudgewhetherthealgorithmisanimprovementonpreviouswork.10、严谨度问题:MNQiseasierthantheprimitivePNQS,howtoprovethat.11、格式(重视程度):◆Inaddition,thelistofreferencesisnotinourstyle.Itisclosebutnotcompletelycorrect.Ihaveattachedapdffilewith"Instructionsfo
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