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1、英语求职信的细节问题写求职信的目的在于获得职位,一封求职信无论如何文辞并茂,令人心动,公司HR主管不见到应聘者本人是不会给予工作机会的。因此,求职信的实际目的在于获得面谈的机会。许多人都会copy网上的求职信范本,导致千篇一律,这是非常不可取的。我们已经讲过怎样写求职信,这次我们来谈谈求职信写作中容易被忽略的细节问题。 一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的,有些专家认为不宜用分词句子,比如用下面的句子做开头,因为这样的句子被人用得大多,显得陈腐,失去特点。 Replyingtoyouradvertisement... Ansent... Belie
2、vingthatthereisanopportunity... Thinkingthatthereisavacancyinyourpany... Havingreadyourad... 再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。 A: (1)ReplyingtoyourrecentadvertisementintheBostonEveningGlobe,Ianager. (2)Iamapplyingforthepositionofsalesmanager.Ibelievemyqualificationsee
3、tyourexactingrequirements. B: (1)Ibelieveafterreadingyouradvertisementinthismorning'sJournalthatyouareofferingjusttheopportunityIamlookingfor. (2)Youradvertisementinthismorning'sJournalforanadjustmentmanagerpromptedmetoapplyforthisposition. C: (1)Havingreadyouradvertisement
4、intheNeesforanaccountant,Ithoughtyoumightbeinterestedinmyapplication. (2)Inyouradvertisementforanaccountant,youindicatedthatyourequiretheservicesofapetentperson,eanapplicantfortheposition.HerearemyreasonsforbelievingIamqualifiedforthisonthtobesatisfactory. It'shardformetosayys
5、alaryshouldbesetat,butifpressedIonthasaninitialsalary. Idon'tfeelthatIshouldsetmyohappyenoughtohavetheprivilegeofonthsatisfactorypensationformyapprenticeship. 三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意,下列句子不宜使用: Asforsalary,Idonotknoonthbetoomuch? DoyouthinkIuchifIsaid5,000dollarsamonth? Youkno
6、yservicesareyletter,Ishallbegladtotalkyqualificationsmeetyourstandards,Ieknomediately,asI'msureaninterviethemanforthejob. (2)改写后:IebytelephoneatBeijing123456bet.and5:30-9:30p.m.anyevening. C: (1)哀求式的句子,不够完整(漏掉面谈时间):IatterfurtherberisBeijing12345678.Youcanreachmebetweennineand
7、fiveo'clockduringtheday.
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