my impression of university life

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1、MyImpressionofUniversityLifeHoeflies!OnemonthhaspassedbeforeIcouldtakeanynoticeofit.ThisisthestartofmyfreshmanyearinFudanUniversity.Attheverybeginning,everythingandeveryoneisstrangetome.Butnogettingbetter;Iamgettingusedtoit.Iyuniversitylifethatareofgreatimportancean

2、dinterest.Freedomislookingforyprimaryschool.Alotofpeoplesaidtome,Studyhard,andyoucostsmealot.IfIrefusetoyclothes,forexample,theyyself.eanthatIdon＇tlikethelifestyle.Onthecontrary,Ilikeitverymuchthoughitishardatthebeginning.Itisreallyachallengeforme.Iappreciateafamous

3、sayingfromAlbertCamus,Freedomisnothingbutachancetobebetter.That＇sright.Realfreedomeseteenagersbelievethatfreedommeansdoingatall.Onecanhavehisorhero,etimerespectothers＇.Itisnoteasytothinkonbehalfofothers.Universitylifeprovidesmeentionislove.Loveintheuniversityisdiffe

4、rentfromotherplaces.Inmysecondaryschool,loveamongstudentsarestrictlyforbidden.Butsinceitishumannaturetodesireforsomethingthatisnotalloesomelovebirdsflyingaroundus.Parentsandteachersareunakegreateffortstostopthesebirdsflying.Istillremembertyfriendsyteachersfinallyhad

5、toendtheirpuppylove,thoughunethinginterestinginFudanisthatloveexistseveryyEnglishclassisaboutlove.AsmallplayintheYingxin(Freshmeneofmyroommateshaveboyfriends.Atnight,ore,evenourinstructoroncesaid,Inourdepartment,girlsaremorethanboys.SoistryDepartment,thesituationine

6、onetofallinloveentionedabovearethetpressedmemostattheverybeginningofmyfreshmenyear.Theyaresurelymyfirstimpression,andIamsureyuniversitylifeIoreoutofit.简评该文章语言比较流畅自然，能够很恰当地结合引语，AlbertCamus的引言有点睛之感。也有较好的使用英语修辞能力，如将学生之间的恋情比为lovebirdsflyingaroundus，语言绘声绘色，有很强的表现力。文章的谋篇布

7、局也是不错的，开首点明了大学生活的总体感受之后，没有老生常谈般的报学校生活的流水账，而是将着眼点放在了两个很具有大学生活特色的具体内容上——自由和爱情，这样就很能引起读者阅读的兴趣。在具体描述大学生的自由和爱情给的感受时，她以一个大学新生的眼光——严格地说应该是一个高中生的眼光——写出了新生活新观点给自己带来的冲击。这充分反映出了对生活变化的敏锐感知力。尤其值得一提的是“自由”部分的描述，不仅仅局限于客观描写，还加入了自己的思考，写出了“Realfreedomeswithresponsibility．”这样闪耀着年轻人智慧火花

8、和责任感的好句子。但需要指出的是，文章美中不足的是结尾，显得比较仓促，仅仅是对开头的简单重申，让人读后有虎头蛇尾之感。如果能将结尾处理得更精致些，再稍有升华，整篇文章就很完美了。