my first year in college,my first year in college范文

my first year in college,my first year in college范文

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4、maturityIget.Universityeducationensuresstudentsofbetterjobs.Iusuallyreckonthattimeconsumingonstudyisportanteventsasoccupation,careerandresponsibility.Tosomeextent,studyandpracticeareinterttheverystartoffreshmanyear.StudentUnionenjoysalmostpleteacceptance.Itisaplaceakealotoffriendseinterests.Butsom

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6、出来,的语言功底较为扎实,词汇的使用准确而地道。从学习和实践两个方面进行阐述,并在末尾进行了总结,对文章开头进行了呼应,显示了娴熟的写作手法。不过,从标题来看,这篇文章应当是写对大一的总结和感受。论述提纲也是如此,但有点过于注重论证,去justify自己各方面的行为,而非从内心自我的角度出发去谈自己的感受,除了在第二段用了几个I作为句子的主语以外,文章的其余部分几乎没有用I或my,反而是用了几次you,这样显得客观有余,亲切不足,是本文的美中不足之处。(点评教师:孙东云)MyFirstYearinCollege英语作文网为您收集英语作文网

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