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1、我眼中的国庆节大学英语作文MyVieeAmountofHolidayAsevendaylongholidayhasfloyhappyhoursduringthevacation,I＇vebeenlookingforeseemedtohaveenjoyedthevacation,too.Then,isitfairthatpeoplehavethesameamountofholidaysregardlessoftheiroccupations?Nevertheless,divergentvieerge
2、onthematterinquestion.Somepeopleareoftheopinionthatlaborersshouldhavethesamelengthofholiday.Theyholdthevieeamountofleisuretimemayeliminatetheunfairnessamongpeopleightbeupsetpsychologicallyifotherayseemtobeanattractiveidea,butitdoesn＇tbearmuchanalysis.
3、Tobegineneededtorefreshtheirphysicalconditionvaries.Forexample,bluecollarayorementallystressed.Unabletooretimetopullthroughthementaledifferentresponsibilitiesandhavedifferentdegreesofpressure.Secondly,differenttasksanddutiesarerequiredfordifferentprof
4、essions,resultinginthevarietyofholidayperiodsforpeopleindifferenteemployeescannothavetheirlegalholidaysandevenhavetoe,suchaspolicemen,constructionornent;otheress.Evenforsomepeopleinthesameoccupation,theycannothavethesameholidaysentitledtothemduetomany
5、factorsoutofhumancontrol,suchasspecialassignments,andhealthconditionsetc,thennottosaypeopleindifferentfields.（Lonths＇holidayinayear.Thenfactorieshavetoemployconsiderablymoreeofthemareenjoyinghappyholiday.That＇sobviouslyagainsttheprinciplesofdoingbusin
6、essatloetovisitthosetouristresortsleisurely.Itgoesentofscienceandtechnologyalloaketheirprograms,doctorsgivepatientsdiagnosisandtutorsgivestudentsinstructionsathomethroughopticalfabriccableconnections.That＇shoSOHObore.Inotherepeopleneedmoretimetorecove
7、rfromthefatigueoflabor.Andsomepeoplecannotmakeendsmeetthoughtheyholidayisae.Itisneitherpossiblenornecessaryforpeopleeamountofholidayoff.Holidayisakindofbonus,justastheChineseidiomgoes,distributionaccordingtowork.简评冯佳莹同学的这篇作文思路清晰，分析丝丝入扣，是一篇非常优秀的议论文。这篇作
8、文的开头清新自然，通过自己对国庆假期的感受，进而联想到其他各行各业的人的想法，引出了本文的主题，显得毫不做作。写这篇作文时，显然进行了深入的思考，因而分析有理有据，闪烁着的真知灼见和思想火花。的语言很出色，句式长短交错，段落层次分明，句与句之间以及句群之间的衔接都非常清晰，倾向于使用then，that，those等连词和代词来衔接上下文，而没有使用过多的定语从句，既使句式的长度得到了控制，又避免了中国学生常见的定语长句(尤其是非限定性定语从句)过多的弊病。尽管使用了一些短语，但整篇
