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1、ATriptotheSummerPalace大学英语作文Itissaidthattheostdesirableinautumn.Lookingoverhead,Isaan'sreach.This,togethermymind.Onsuchafinemorning,IpaidmyvisittotheSummerPalace.Iarrivedtherearound9o'clockandsinceitendousnumberoftourists.Andthesceneattheentranceogemittedbycongestedbusesandcars,
2、noisesoftourguides'speakersandvehicles'horns.Yettheancientgardenmysteriouslyexcludedthosemotionsall.RoamingalongtheslightlyslopingpathsinLongevityHill,Iosphereofextremetranquility.Yousaanner.Youheardthetutebodyofoldtrees,eposturesdidinspiredifferentvagaries.Andneverperingnaughti
3、lyandboldlyonthesheenygrass.SoIstrolledthere,dreamingthatonedayIcouldjustliveneartheSummerPalace,sothatIcouldvisithereeverydaals;sothatIcouldfindanyquietrecesstoidleaanyhoursasIlikediddleofthehillfacingtheKunmingLake.Herethelandscapeofnatureandamazeofarchitectureintegratedperfec
4、tly.Stopforaeintoyoursight,sometimesdistantmountainsageofatoetimesavistaofallthehallsandatticsandgatesandpagoda;sometimesthevastglitteringlakespottederousboatsandyachts.（转载自中国评价网.nseac.）GoingdoingLakeintotetricallydifferenttemperaments.Ononesideedalmostreclusive,likeahuge,immacu
5、latecrystalinlaidinearth,absorbingandreflectingthesubtleplexionofheaven,adeepblueildlybrightluster,mingledmer,theirverdantleavesdidinfusemuchlifeintothelandscape.Therebeingnoegentlebreezeetersilentlyslided,onebyone,thusproducedasoftpaletteoffloeditativeserenitythatissublimeandpu
6、rifyingandthereforeformedanexquisitetensionsothatyouneverfelttiredofeither.Admittedly,itisimpossibletofullyenjoyallthebeautyofSummerPalaceinabriefday.Butthat'senoughforittoinscribealastingmemoryinmymindofitsintoxicatingpleasureandselancholy.简评游山玩水，美在眼里，美在心中。然而，要将自己眼里心中之美流诸笔端、形于纸
7、上并与读者共赏却非易事。这篇优美的游记以自然的游览顺序为线索：“around9o'clock'’到颐和园；“soon”到佛香阁；“GoingdowntheLongevityHill”我又到了长廊；最后由“alltheway"收束全篇，脉络分明，结构清楚。在游记的每一部分，描写记述各有侧重：刚到颐和园，重点写园内的宁静；登上佛香阁，重点写人文建筑与自然山水的交融；及至万寿山与昆明湖与长廊，则重点写天水一色，碧莲浮波。另外，很善于对比法的使用：写园内的宁静先写园外的喧嚣。园外的车水马龙与园内的松（转载自zw.ＮＳＥaＣ.作文网）鼠鸟鸣进行对比，更显尘世之外
8、的宁静。至于用词精美的例子更是随处可见，不胜枚举。(点评教师：林燕)
