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1、1高考英语作文范文假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教MrJenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,已使行文连贯。【答案】DearMsJenkins,IamLiHua,IamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthecomingsummervacationandIalsowantyoutodomeafavor.Inordertogetsomeprac
2、ticalexperience,Iamplanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncapitalcompany.Ihavealreadyfinishedmyjobapplicationandpersonalresume.ButthisisthefirsttimethatIhavewrittenanapplicationandthepersonalsresume,soIdon’tevenknowiftherearesomethingtopayattentionto.So,I’mwrit
3、ingyoutheletter,hopingyoucangivemesomehelp.Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucanhelpme.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.AndI’dbereallythankful.Yours,LiHua【亮点】本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确,要点全面,语言通顺流畅,很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的,然后具体讲述自己的困难,再提出请求,最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外,作者还使用了不定式短语Inorder
4、togetsomepracticalexperience,、现在分词短语hopingyoucangivemesomehelp、宾语从句iftherearesomethingtopayattentionto等。经典句式thisisthefirsttimethatIhavewrittenanapplicationandthepersonalsresume也是文章的亮点所在。2考高作文范文假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍。2.
5、稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词汇4.交稿日期:6月28日前天注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的;3.开头语已为你写好。【参考答案】DearPeter,I'dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfri
6、endsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingreleva
7、ntsolongasit’sinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua不够丰富【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.运用了过去
8、分词作后置定语,AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.运用了宾语从句。此外,文章还使用了大量习语和短语,如bepopularamong,solongas,lookfor
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