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1、1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么?2.也会带来一些问题;3.你的看法?点评:2009年的四级考试作文沿袭了近几年四级作文的特点,即问题解决型+观点对比型的结合。属社会类话题,纵观各个辅导机构的预测作文,没有人预测博物馆的话题。但是就今年的考题形式而言,三个段落的写法在课堂上都讲到了。下面是分析:按照课堂所讲审题阶段应该关注英文标题和汉语提纲,即:1)FreeAdmissiontoMuseums2)汉语提纲3条。从中可知,核心话题是freeadmission,从三个方面来探讨这一话题即可。根据"先结构后表达"的原则安排段落结构即可做到结构清晰:先结构:1、段写该现象的目的(其实就
2、是好处);2、段写问题(即负面影响);3、段写看法(或解决措施)后表达:确定好各段结构之后,利用3分钟时间联想各部分可以选用的句式和词汇表达,并以关键词的形式列出以帮助自己理顺写作的思维。 写作完成之后,检查。下面为用课堂所讲套路写的简易版本,供大家参考。FreeAdmissiontoMuseums首段版本1:Inrecentyears,anincreasingnumberofmuseumsbecomefreetothepublic.(或:Itcanbenoticedthat...)Thereareseveralaimsforthisphenomenon,butthefollowingm
3、aybethemostcritical.Freeadmissionenablespeople,especiallystudents,tohavemoreopportunitiestovisitmuseums,wheretheycanacquireknowledgeofhistory,arts,customsandsoforth.版本2:AccordingtoarecentsurveybyChinaDaily,about84.3%ofmuseumsbecomefreetothepublic.Bydoingso,museumsattractmillionsofpeopletovisitever
4、yday.Inaddition,thevisitors,especiallystudents,broadentheirhorizonsandenlargetheirscopeofknowledge.中间段:Thereare,however,severalnegativeeffectswhichwecannotturnablindeyeto.Firstly,owingtofreeadmission,alargenumberofvisitorswillvisitmuseums.Consequently,themuseummaybecometoocrowded.Evenworse,freeadm
5、issionmayresultinsomefinancialproblems.Forinstance,museumworkerscanhardlygetenoughsalary.Lastbutnotleast,thepreservationofculturalheritagemaybeimpaired.尾段:版本1:(课堂讲过的)Personally,Iamconvincedthatfreeadmissiontomuseumisatwo-edgedsword,whichpresentsusbothadvantages?andtroubles.Thebestpolicy,asIseeit,i
6、stomaximizethebenefitsandminimizethenegativeinfluences.版本2:Frommypointofview,itishightimethatwetookmeasurestoeliminatethenegativeimpacts.Firstly,regulationsshouldbeworkedouttolimitthenumberofvisitorstomuseumeveryday.Secondly,itisadvisableforgovernmenttoofferfinancialassistancetomuseums.Onlyinthisw
7、aycanmuseumsprovideservicetopublicinabetterway.FreeAdmissiontomuseums越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么?也会带来一些问题;你的看法?FreeAdmissiontoMuseums?Nowadays,alotofmuseumsopentothepublicforfree,andalotofpeopleareattractedtogothere.How