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1、3月月考情景作文情景作文假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。最近你班组织了一次活动，寻找身边的雷锋。请根据下图提示将此次活动情况记录下来，并以“LookingforLeiFeng”为题向你校英语报刊投稿。注意：1．文章题目已为你写好。2．词数不少于60。LookingforLeiFeng审题:1.文体:记叙文2.时态:一般过去时;一般现在时，现在完成时;3.人称:第一人称4.内容要点：1.走出学校寻找雷锋（相机、小组）2.在街上看到献血车处很多人在等候献血(拍照、感受)3.在街上还看到有人在帮助残疾人下台阶在公共汽车上看到有人给老年人让座位4.办“寻找身边的雷锋”宣传墙报5.对此次活
2、动的感受问题：1.审题：lookingforLeiFeng（8分）2.语言错误词性：kind—kindnesswithouthesitate—withouthesitation名词：anoldpeople—anoldperson/man/womanhelpabind—helpablindman搭配：thereasonof…—thereasonfor…devote/contributeblood—donateblood连接：first—atfirst3.无效细节：helpthemcleantheroomalsotakeapictureforthepeopletryingtoprotectt
3、heenvironment丢落细节：让座,拍照，做图片宣传栏4.时态：混用5.Therebe句式：Therewasablindmanwentdownstairs–6.反复重复使用同一个动词或同一个句式find—see,notice,spot,note,witness,comeacross,catchsightof,meetwith,takenoticeofTherewasablindmangoingdownstairs.Languagebank:Topicsentence:LastweekourclassheldagreatactivitytolookforLeiFengaroundus
4、Recentlyameaningfulactivitywasorganizedbymyclass,whichleftadeepimpressiononme.Recentlyweorganizedameaningfulactivity—lookingforLeiFeng,whichleftusgreatimpression.Recently,myclassmatesandIorganizedanactivity“lookingforLeiFeng”.WiththeLeiFeng’sDayaroundthecorner,weexpectedtodiscoverandrecordthegood
5、thingshappeningaroundus.Recentlyourclassorganizedanactivitycalled“lookingforLeiFeng”,whichaimedatfindingthosewarm-heartedpeoplearoundusandletmorepeoplelearnaboutthespiritofLeiFeng.Languagebank:leavetheschoolwithcamerasinourhandsgooutofourschool,camerainhandbythreesandtwosOnFridayafternoon,welefta
6、fterschoolintwosandthrees,headingforthestreet,camerasinhand.OnThursdaymorning,myclassmatesandIsetoutfromschoolwithourcamerassothatwecouldtakephotosofwhatwewouldsee.Earlyinthemorning,myclassmatesandIsteppedoutofourcampus,eachofuswithacamerahangingaroundournecks,andstartedouractivity.Languagebank:b
7、looddonorn.献血者donatebloodtoabloodbank向血库献血ablooddonationbus献血车waitinlinefortheirturntodenotetheirbloodqueuetogetonthedonationbustogivetheirbloodAtfirstwecameacross/saw/noticedablooddonationbus,alonglineofvolunteerswait
