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1、创新作文大赛系列讲练之二写作李兴民Thebicycleisimportantforus.Thebicycleisofimportanceforus.Thebicycleplaysanimportantroleinourlife.Thebicycle,environmentalfriendlyvehicle,playsanimportantroleinourlife.Thebicycleisliketheair,water,andsunshineandcannotbepartedwithamomentinourlife.走出房间，空洞的表达方式：walkoutoftheroom小偷走出

2、房间应该说：slip/sneakoutoftheroom美女走出房间应该说：sailoutoftheroom小孩走出房间应该说：danceoutoftheroom老人走出房间应该说：staggeroutoftheroom差的作文中简单句多，而好的作文简单句少；差的作文从句、连词、分词结构出现的频率大大低于好的作文；差的作文中关键词和同义表达出现的频率低于好的作文。a.语言准确化b.语言多样化c.结构清晰化d.内容简单化写作的三个角度：语言第一位；结构第二位；内容第三位结构简单，语言卓越，内容相关创新真题:Chinesepeoplealwayshavethetraditionofhel

3、pingothers;regardlessofafriendorastranger.However,inrecentyears,peoplefindthatwhentheytrytohelpothers,somechangesaretakingplaces.Oneofthemostcommonexamplesisthat,apasser-bywhosentaninjuredseniorpeopletohospitalwouldbeverylikelytoberecognizedastheaccident-maker.Thiskindofeventsisbeingrerunagaina

4、ndagain.Whentrappedinthedilemmaoftraditionandtrouble,whatwouldbeyourchoice?议论文1.陈述观点（有独到见解）2.论证观点或理由（思路清晰，观点明确，论证充分；语言流畅，词汇丰富，句式多样；有效地使用语句、段落间的连接成分,内容连贯，结构紧凑;词汇和语法使用恰当,错误较少。）3.总结(呼应主题)1.医生只是换了个头.2.修改后的病人，戴了项链，戴了眼镜，头发竖起，头上流汗。3.从修改过的病人中能够看出霸道、愤怒、自大等一些关键词Writing(本题共100分)Whichoneofthemdoyouthinkist

5、heexpert?Firstcompletetheconversation.Thenwritedownyouropiniononthequalitiesofbeinganexpert.五个步骤:1、审题文字信息图画信息题材(议论文、记叙文、书信、说明文)、人称、时态、要点2、词及要点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点即要使用的句型短语。(关键：平时积累)3、连词成句：用连词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。4连句成文：①使用较高级的词汇②使用较丰富的句式③使用恰当的连接词5、检查修改，规范抄写①使用较高级的词汇1.Wealthdoesnotalwaysbringhappin

6、ess.Wealthdoesnotalwaysgohandinhandwithhappiness.2.Weallknowthatknowledgeispower.Thereisnodoubtthatknowledgeispower.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatknowledgeispower.3.Theremanywaystokeepfit.Therearenumerouswaystokeepfit.4.Weshouldusedifferentwaystogettoknowthesociety.Weoughttomakeuseofvariousmethodstoge

7、ttoknowthesociety.Wearesupposedtotakeadvantageofdiversemeanstogettoknowthesociety.5.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.6.Whensheheardhehaddied,shewentpalewithsorrow.7.ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstu