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1、DescribingpicturesHeYunqin大学英语四级写作评分标准简单来说，是以下几条：14分文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，无重大语言错误，仅有个别小错。11分文章切题。文字通顺，条理清楚，但有少量语言错误。8分基本切题。有些地方表达不清，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。5分基本切题。思想表达不清，连贯性差，有较多的语言严重错误。2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎，大部分有错误，且多数为严重错误。l．白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给零分。2.字
2、数不足者酌情扣分(81-89个词扣1分，7l-80个词扣2分，61-70个词扣3分，51一60个词扣4分，不足50个词最多只给5分)。所计字数不包括卷面上已给主题句。3．只写一段者0-4分，只写两段者0-9分。Steps:1) describethepicture2) interpretitsmeaning/message3) giveyouropinionaboutthephenomenonconveyedinthepicture(4)giveyourconclusion.)1.描述漫画句:*Fromth
3、ecartoonwecanseethat_____.*Wecanseefromthecartoonthat_____.*Asisindicatedinthecartoon,_____.2.引出暗含主题句*Wecandeducefromthesetwovividdrawingsthat_____.*Whathasbeendescribedinthecartooncarriesgreatmeanings/implicationsforourlife,esp.howto_____.*Whatitillustrat
4、esisacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety,anditexpresses/conveysthesymbolicmeaningof_____.3.引出漫画人画图目的句*Whatisthepurposeofthedrawerofthiscartoon?Inthefirstplace,_____.Inthesecondplace,_____.4.引出原因句*Therearequiteafewpossiblereasonssuggestedhere.Tobeginwith,_____
5、.Inthesecondplace,_____.Finally,_____.*Therearesomepossiblereasonsforthistendency.Tobeginwith,_____.Inthesecondplace,_____.Finally,_____.*Whatcausedtheeffect?Thereareatleasttwopossiblereasons.Tobeginwith,_____.Inthesecondplace,_____.5.引出对策句*Itis,therefore,
6、necessarythateffortsshouldbemadetodeal/copewiththeproblemasearlyaspossible.*Weshouldtakeimmediatemeasures,forifthepresentsituationcontinuesasbefore,seriousoutcomewillcomeup.*AsfarasI’mconcerned,mysuggestionsareasfollows.6.过渡句*Itisclearthat___playsanimporta
7、ntroleinourlifeandwork.*Theremaybesomeotherreasonsresponsiblefor___,butIthinkwhathasbeenmentionedaboveisgenerallyacceptable.*Thisismypointofviewastohowto___,andIamsurethatmyideasarebothsoundandreasonable.7.举例子*Acaseinpointismyneighbor,who_____.*I'dliketoqu
8、ote/citeafurtherexamplehere.*Accordingtoarecentsurvey,90%ofthepeopleacrossthecountryaresufferingfromtheproblem.*Anothersurveyalsoshowsthatthetrendisturningfrombadtoworse.8.列举意义的短语Inthefirstplace,___.Intheseco
