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1、信件说明文假如你是李明,你的朋友王刚在来信中说他们班有几个同学为了显示自己成熟或耍“酷”而吸烟,他怀着好奇心,也偷偷尝试了吸烟。请你写一封100词左右的回信,告诉王刚吸烟的危害并给出你的建议。注意:1.信的开头和结尾已经给出,但不计入总词数;2.参考词汇:成熟的matureDearWangGang,I'msorrytolearnthatyouandsomeofyourclassmateshavebeguntosmoke._____________________________________________
2、_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing审题1.该篇作文格式为应用文——书信。书信的主体部分为议论文,讨论吸烟的危害。通常用一般现在时表达。2.全文可按“总——分——总”结构布局,分三段:第一段:提出论点,即smokingisnotcoolbutverydangerous。第二段:论证论点,阐述危害。第三段:提
3、出自己的建议,即:放弃吸烟。第一段:提出论点有些同学为了显示自己成熟或耍“酷”而吸烟,事实上,吸烟是有害的。参考短语:cool,dangerous,makessb.appearmaturenot…but…参考句型:Ithinkitiswrongtobelievesmokingis……Infact,smokingisnot…but….第二段:论证论点,阐述危害。危害三:引起火灾,危机生命和周围环境参考短语:causefireeasilydogreatdamagetosurroundings.过渡词汇:atlas
4、t/lastly/lastbutnotleast参考句型:Atlast,smokingcancause...,which…危害三:危害公众和家人的健康,特别是妇女和儿童参考短语:haveinfluenceon,publichealththepeoplearound…especially/inparticular过渡词汇:atlast/lastly/lastbutnotleast参考句型:…isathreatto…,especiallyto…smokingdoesharmtothehealthofsmokers
5、andeventhepeoplenearthem.第三段:提出自己的建议,我认为你应该放弃吸烟,这样身体才能健康参考短语:giveup/stopkeephealthy/fit过渡词汇:inmyopinion;inaword参考句型:You'dbettergiveup….Onlyinthiswaycanyoukeephealthy.Don'ttouch...….shouldn‘tsmoke...;…suggestyoushould……giveupsmokingforthesakeofyourhealth,for
6、thesakeofyourfamily,andforthesakeofthewholeworld.DearWangGang,I'msorrytolearnthatyouandsomeofyourclassmateshavebeguntosmoke.Ithinkitiswrongtobelievesmokingiscoolandmakesyouappearmature.Infact,smokingisnotcoolbutverydangerous.First,smokingdoesgreatharmtoheal
7、th.Scientificresearchshowsthatsmokingcanleadtoheartdiseases,cancerandotherproblems.Itisreportedthatabout5millionpeopleallovertheworlddiefromdiseasesrelatedtosmokingeachyear.Second,itisawasteofmoneytobuyCigarettes.Onceyouareaddictedtoit,itisdifficulttogiveit
8、up.What’smore,smokingcancausefireeasily,whichmaydogreatdamagetoyourlifeandyoursurroundings.Sogiveupsmokingatonce.Onlyinthiswaycanyoukeephealthy.Yours,LiMing
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