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1、写作讲座I.写作概述基本要求1.篇幅:120-150字达不到字数要求的,要酌情扣1-5分;90-99扣1分,80-90扣2分,70-79扣3分,60-69扣5分;2.布局:三段式只写一段为0-4分,只写两段0-9分;3.评分标准:2分---条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,但多数为严重错误;5分-基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误;8分-基本切题。有些地方表达思想不过清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误;11分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误;14分-切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯
2、性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错误。例如:1)有人认为机会是极少的2)有人认为机会人人都有3)我的看法Sample1 Astotheopportunity,thereistwodifferentopinions:first,someonethinktheopportunityislittleintheirlife.Secondly,someoneconsiderthatopportunityisexistingeverywhereeverybodyhassomekindsofchance.Accordingtomylifeexperimentandkn
3、owledgeIagreewiththesecondidea.Thereischanceforeveryoneinsomeunexpectedcase.Butifyouhasnopreparingforit,theopportunitywilllose.Thosewhohavemanypreparationandmuchknowledge,andsomegoodvirtue,mayIquiptheopportunityfirmly.Forexample,twomanareappealingforajobinacompany,andthereisonlyoneva
4、cantjobfortheonlyoneofthetwoman.How,thetwomanhasanopportunitytogettheJobbutthebosscertainlywouldacceptthegoodone. SoIthinktheopportunityisexistingtoeveryone,butmoreopportunityisbelongstowhohasknowledge,experience,encourageandconfident.该篇文章条理不清,思想紊乱,语言支离破碎,几乎没有正确的句子,得2分。Sample2 So
5、meonethinksthattheopportunityisveryfewforhimbecausehehasnevermeetthechance.Butotheronethinkstherearechanceshereandthere,theneveryonecanmeetopportunity. Iresistthesecondopinion.Theretoaresomeopportunities,theimportantthingisthatifwecouldcatchthechancewhenwemeetit.Inourliveswehavealo
6、tofchoicethatneedustakeourheartto.Forexample,whenIwasalittleboy,myhealthwasverybad.Onedayateacheradvisemetojointhebasketballwithmyfriends.Myhealthbecomewell.SoIthinkthereareopportunitiesforeveryone.该篇文章基本切题,但思想表达不清楚,有很多严重的语言错误,属于5分档。Sample3 Somepeoplethinkthattheylackofopportunitie
7、s,whileothersthinkthateveryonewillfacetosomeones.Iagreetothelatter. Infact,wearelivingonthesameworld.Mostofusmustdealwithalotofthingseveryday.Somepeople'scircumstancesareeventhesame,sodotheopportunities.However,whysomeonecangraspitbutotherscannot?Allthisdependsonthecarefulobservati
8、onandgraspin