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1、OnCollegeDegree开头开宗明义，没有许多题外话。这点很重要，因为有的同学写作文开头会写很多，而真正重要的分析问题往往因时间不够会草草了事。Manyyearsago,graduatescouldfmdsatisfactoryjobsaftertheirgraduation.However,nowthingsaretotallydifferent.Newgraduatesusuallyareundergreatpressureinfindingjobs.Theyalwayssaythatgraduationmeansunemployment.中
2、间分析问题要有条理，连接词不一定要用“first”、“second”，本文的连接词“tobeginwith”、“洒addition”同学也可以借鉴。Thiskindofpressurethatnewgraduateshavetoendureismainlycausedbythesereasonsasfollows.Tobeginwith,mostofcollegestudentsarethe"only-child",whoaremorementallydependent.Oncetheybegintofindjobsbythemselvesafterg
3、raduation,theyreallydon'tknowwhattodo.Iftheirfirsttryfails,theywillthinkthatitisreallydifficulttofindjobs.Inaddition,someumversitystudentsarenotqualifiedfordesiTablejobs.Owingtospendingtoomuchtimeoncomputergamesorothersunimpmtantthings,theirstudyisneglected.Asaresult,theyhaven't
4、gainedtheknowledgethosedesirablepositionsrequireafterfouryearsofuniversitylife.解决问题部分最好用到上文分析的结果，再根据分析的结果提出解决问题的方法。比如本文提出的解决方法“Studentsshouldattachgreaterimportancetotheirstudythantrivialiti6s”就是针对上文的分析“Owingtospendingtoomuchtimeoncomputergamesorothersunimportantthings,theirstud
5、yisneglected”，这样提出的解决方法才让人信服，也让文章结构更加紧凑。Thissituationcanbeimproved,althoughthegovemmentisincreasingthegrowthofenrollingundergraduatesyearly.Studentsshouldattachgreaterimportancetotheirstudythantrivialities.Besides,undergraduatescangainmoresocialexperiencebydoingsomepart-timejobs
6、duringweekendsandvacations.点评：该文是一篇议论文范文。文章结构为开头提出问题，中间分析问题，结尾解决问题。议论文一般都町参考该结构。另外，“owingto”、“spend---on”、“asaresult”等词组和句型的正确使用也使文章增色不少。GraduateStudyoraJobTolandadecentjob,ortopursuegraduatestudy?Itisreallyadilemma(左右为难)arepresentedinfrontofus.whenthealtematives(供选方案)Itisbeyond
7、doubtthatsomeactiveandambitious（雄心勃勃的）studentswillnothesitateamomenttochoosetheformer.Theyareeagertodemonstrate(展示)theirabilitiesandvalue.Theyassert(声称)thatacollegeeducationisenough.ThinkofBillGates,theMicrosoftChairman,whosesuccessraisesdoubtsabouttheworthofaMBAdegree.AsfarasI'
8、mconcerned,Ibelievethatwehaveeveryreasontoprefe
