新托福写作要熟悉英语和汉语的表达区别

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1、智课网TOEFL备考资料forthequalityofreviewsandreview.Article26threview(a)theCCRAcompliance,whethercopiesofchecks;(B)whetherdoubleinvestigation;(C)submissionofprogramcompliance,investigationorexaminationofwhetherviewsareclear;(D)theborrower,guarantorloans新托福写作要熟悉英语和汉语的表达区别表达受中文影响的问题英

2、语和汉语表达有区别，如果在新托福写作中套汉语思维，就是中式化英语的表现。这只能使文章语言蹩脚、冗赘。所以考生在平时阅读英语材料和练习写作时，要注意英语表达和汉语表达的差别，切忌在托福写作备考中硬套汉语思维。1.Original:Ifweagreetosaythatschooloffersusthebestbookknowledgeacquisitionthenoursocietyoffersusthebestsurvivingtechniquesinahardway。Revised:Ifweagreethatschooloffersthebe

3、stmethodfortheacquisitionofbookknowledge,thenoursocietyoffersusthebestmethodforacquiringcommonsenseor“streetsmarts”。Agreetosaythat表达中式化，只需要agreethat即可;thebestbookknowledgeacquisition改为thebestmethodfortheacquisitionofbookknowledge(学校给我们提供了获取书本知识的最好方法)更为恰当，同样，后面的thebestsurviv

4、ingtechniques改为thebestmethodforacquiringcommonsense...;加上streetmarks(街头智慧)给文章的词汇增添色彩。2.Original:Theycanspendmoretimestudyingeducationandcommunicationtoimprovetheirroleasamother,wifesanddaughter。Revised:Theycanalsodecidetospendmoretimestudying,educationthemselves,inordertoim

5、provethemselvesintheirrolesasmothers,wivesanddaughters。原句中studyingeducationandforthequalityofreviewsandreview.Article26threview(a)theCCRAcompliance,whethercopiesofchecks;(B)whetherdoubleinvestigation;(C)submissionofprogramcompliance,investigationorexaminationofwhetherviewsa

6、reclear;(D)theborrower,guarantorloanscommunication的说法中式化，不符合英语的表述，应该为studying，educatingthemselves。除了词语表达，此句中还存在其他问题，如名词单复数的使用：不是提高他们的角色，而是提高他们自身以扮演好母亲角色。还有，女性不止一个人。很多人都在扮演母亲角色，role和mother应用复数，故将improvetheirroleasamother改为improvethemselvesintheirrolesasmother;同样，为保持一致，wife和d

7、aughter也可用复数，原文中wife的复数写法有误，应该是wives。3.Original：IfyoucangetthepointofcommunicationbywatchingTV，willyou...?Revised：Ifonecanlearnaboutcommunicatingfromtelevision，willyou...?原句的getthepointofcommunicationbywatchingTV表达不清，让人难以理解，应该是指“从电视上学习交际”：learnaboutcommunicatingfromtelevisi

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