中考英语写作(书面表达)

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中考英语书面表达（广东省）一.题型攻略题型解读书面表达是中考中的主观题，分值为15分。培养写作技能，训练语言表达能力是新教材英语语言教学的主要内容之一。《新课标》要求学生能在所学词汇、语法和句型的基础上造简单的句子；能仿照学过的题材和所给的范例写简单的书信、便条、通知等。书面表达是中考英语测试的一个重要方面，综合考查学生运用所学英语知识进行语言表达的能力。考查角度：（一）考查考生能力：1.观察能力2.思维能力3.综合分析能力4.运用语言知识的能力5.用英语组词造句，连句成篇的能力6.书写能力（二）考查考生基础语言基础知识：1.词类常识2.词类的句法功能3.动词八种时态用法4.动词不定式及动名词的用法5.情态动词的用法6.形容词和副词比较等级及最高级的用法7.主谓一致8.被动语态9.从句的用法方法点睛1.仔细审题，理清作文要点，确定时态文体。2.列提纲。3.写作。确保用有把握额词汇和句型，注意文章的连贯性。4.通读全文，检查复核。1.是什么构成一篇好文章？是什么构成一篇好文章？是什么构成一篇好文章1.高级的词汇及短语。Eg.Ilikebasketballandfootball.-Iamfondofbasketballaswellasfootball.Heisagoodstudent.-Heisanexcellentstudent.2.复杂的句型。Eg.Ican’tgowithyoutomorrow.Ihavenotime.-?Ican’tgowithyoutomorrowbecauseIhavenotime.3.好的连贯性。使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，并列and;aswellas;also;too,选择or;either...or;原因because(of);owingto;dueto;thanksto结果so;therefore;thus;asaresult转折but;yet;however;递进besides;举例forexample;suchas;4.好的内容2.如何写好简单句？如何写好简单句句型1：S+V（主谓结构：S=主语；V=谓语）Thestudentslistenedcarefully.Herunsquickly.Myparentsworkdayandnight.句型2：S+V+P(主系表结构：P=表语)Thestorysoundsinteresting.Hebecomesateacherwhenhegrewup.句型3：S+V+O(主谓宾结构：O=宾语)Wefoundtheirhomeeasily.Youshouldlookafteryourchildrenwell.句型4：S+V+O1+O2(主谓双宾结构：O1=间接宾语；O2=间接宾语)Hegaveabooktome.Mybrotherbroughtacomputertoher.句型5：S+V+O+C(主谓宾补结构：C=宾语补足语)Theteachermadethegirlangry.Weallfoundherhappythatday.3.如何写好复合句？句型1：主语+及物动词+that（宾语从句）HefoundthathisEnglishwastoo poor.Hedecidedthathemustworkhard.句型2：主语+whether/if从句（宾语从句）Iwonderwhetherhewillcome.Idon’tknowwhetherhewillarriveontime.句型3：主语+连接代词/连接副词+从句（宾语从句）Nooneknowswhathe’sdoing.Canyoutellmewhenweareleaving?句型4：主句+when/while/as/before/after从句（状语从句）Pleasekeepsilentwhen/whileheiswriting.Whenmymothercamein,Iwasdoingmyhomework.句型5：主句+until/till从句（状语从句）Ididn’tsleepuntil/tilleleveno’clocklastnight.Idomyhomeworkuntil/tillteno’clockeverynight.句型6：主句+since从句/Itis+...since从句（状语从句）Wehavelivedheresincewemovedtothecity.It’sfouryearssincewemetlastnight.Wehavebeengoodfriendssincewewereatschool.句型7：主句+assoonas从句（状语从句）Pleasecallusassoonasyouarriveattheairport.IwilltellyourmotherthenewsassoonasIseeher.句型8：主句+because从句Hedidn’tpasstheexambecausehedidn’tstudyhard.Becauseyouarehere,Iamhere.句型9：主句+sothat/inorderthat从句Canyouspeakloudersothat/inorderthatIcanhearyou?Igetupearlyeverymorningsothat/inorderthatIcanarriveatschoolontime.句型10：主语+be/v.+so+adj./adv+that从句（状语从句）Thechildissolovelythateveryoneloveshersomuch.HeransoquicklythatIcouldn’tcatchupwithhim.句型11：though/although从句+主句（状语从句）Though/Althoughyouareachild,Iwillstillpunishyou.Mygrandfatherisverystrongthoughheisold.2.如何处理句子的衔接？3.表时间的过渡词语：now,than,soon,beforelong,justnow,justthen,suddenly,immediately等。范例：一天下午，一些男孩在操场上踢足球，突然有个孩子跌倒了且伤了腿。Oneafternoonsomeboyswereplayingfootballontheplayground.Suddenlyoneofthemfelloverandhurthisleg.=Oneafternoonsomeboyswereplayingfootballontheplaygroundwhenoneofthemfelloverandhurthisleg.=Oneafternoonwhensomeboyswereplayingfootballontheplayground,oneofthemfelloverandhurthisleg.表顺序及过程的过渡词语：first(ly),firstofall,second(ly),atfirst,then,next,atlast,finally等。范例：每天早晨起床后我有很多事要干，首先刷牙洗脸，接着读书，最后吃饭。IhavealotofthingstodoafterIgetupeverymorning.FirstIbrushmyteeth,washmyface,thendosomereading,atlast/finallyhavebreakfast.=IhavealotofthingstodoafterIgetupeverymorning.FirstlyIbrushmyteeth,washmyface,secondlydosomereading,finallyhavebreakfast.表转折和让步的过渡词语：but,(and)yet,instead,however,although,though,otherwise,orelse,inspiteof等。范例：爸爸虽然很忙，但他总是乐于帮我学英语。Though/Althoughmyfatherisverybusy,healwayslikestohelpmewithmyEnglish. =Thoughmyfatherisverybusy,yethealwayslikestohelpmewithmyEnglish.=Myfatherisverybusy,however,healwayslikestohelpmewithmyEnglish.表结果和原因的过渡词语：thus,therefore,so,so...that,sothat,asaresult,because等。范例：我认为学好英语很重要，因为世界上许多国家都使用它。IthinkitisimportanttolearnEnglishwellbecauseitisusedinmanycountriesintheworld.=EnglishisspokeninmanycountriesintheworldsoIthinkitisimportanttolearnEnglishwell.表总结的过渡词语：finally,inaword,inshort,intheend,inall等。范例：你知道，在我的老师帮助下，我在学习方面取得了很大进步。Asyouknow,withthehelpofmyteachers,Ihavemadegreatprogressinmystudies.=Asyouknow,Ihavemadegreatprogressinmystudieswiththehelpofmyteachers.6.学会列作文提纲：例一：利弊型作文——Microblog的利与弊Para1:（综述）withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepopular…Para2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;Second,share…with…;Last,expressviewsfree,money-free…Para3:（弊）However,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftime——affectstudy;Ontheotherhand,notsafe——stolen,hurtfeelingsPara4:（个人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.例二：计划安排型作文——谈假期安排Para1:（综述）graduatefrom…,holidayiscoming,planforthisholidayPara2:（正文）Firstly,studycomesfirst.makepreparationsforthefirstsenioryear;Secondly,visittouristattractions;Lastbutnotleast,dosportstobuildupmybody.Para3:IamsureI’llhaveameaningfulholiday.(I’mlookingforwardtothecomingholiday.)(Ican’twaittoenjoymysummervocation.)例三：图表、数字比例型作文（提出讨论或调查的事实）Lastweek,ourclasshadaclassmeetingon(howto)…Herearetheresults.（表达出不同看法或观点）Moststudentsthink…While…20%ofthemchooseto….Another15believe…Therearealsosome…sayingthat…（表达个人看法）Asastudent,Iagreeto…例四：说明利弊型作文Nowadays…isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.Ithasmanyadvantages.First,优点1…Besides,优点2…However,everycoinhastwosides.Italsobringsusbadinfluences.Ontheonehand,缺点1…Ontheotherhand,缺点2… Inmyopinion,个人观点…例五：不同观点型Wemadeasurveyaboutwhetherweshould…提出矛盾问题.Differentpeopleholddifferentideas.Somebelieve…正方观点.First,原因1…Besides,原因2…Whileothersdon’tagree.Theythink…反方观点.Ontheonehand,原因1…Ontheotherhand,原因2…Asforme,个人观点…例六：解决问题型Recently,the…problemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.…shoulddosomethingtosolveit.　　Firstly,方法1…Secondly,方法2…Finally,方法3…Iamsureifeveryonecanmakeacontributionto…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.掌握了以上的写作方法和技巧，经过反复的写作磨练，我相信，参加中考的学子们一定会在中考中写出一篇能够展示内心世界的美丽的英语作文。二.典例分析1.应用文1.应用文应用文包括启事、通知、书信、日记、电子邮件等形式。下面举例说明其写作思路和方法。例1.2009年海珠一模假如你的朋友Juliana从美国来你的学校．期末将一起参加考试，她有点紧张。作为朋友，请你写几条建议给她，告诉她注意事项：1．要制定一个复习计划；2．考试前要早早上床，要有充足的睡眠；3．考试前要吃好早餐；4．自由发挥一两条建议。注意：不要逐条翻译，可以适当增加谈论话题时经常用到的词语和连接词，使所写内容连贯。所写内容必须包括以上所有内容，开头和结尾已写好。DearJuliana，I'msorrytohearthatyou’reworriedaboutyourexams．Here’ssomeadvice．Goodluck！Bestwishes!Yours,LiJie写作指导：本文是一封书信，属于应用文。内容是你要向你的朋友Juliana提些建议，让她避免因为考试而紧张得心理。从内容上看，我们可以发现提建议，我们最好采用情态动词，同时可以运用hadbetterdo的句型。另外，我们应当避免对要点的直译，我们可以多使用连贯词如besides，能够使文章更具连贯性。【写作提纲：1、开头称呼（要恰当，一般用dear加名字）2、正文：I'msorrytohearthat...advice...oneofthemostimportantthingtodois...,then...youshould...you'd betterdo...because...,what'smore...3、结束语，Ihope...Goodluck....Bestwishes...4、署名（Yours...）】范文：DearJuliana，I’msorrytohearthatyou’reworriedaboutyourexams．Here’ssomeadvice．Ithinkoneofthemostimportantthingstodoistomakeaplan．Thenyoucanhaveenoughtimetoreviseeverything．Youshouldgotobedearlyandhaveagoodsleepsothatyouwillfeelgoodthenextmorning．Everymorning，you’dbetterhaveagoodbreakfastandyoucaneatsomebread，milkfruitandsoon，becausefoodgivesyouenergy．Whatismore，Ithinkyoumustn’tbetoonervousabouttheexams，anditcanhelpyouthinkclearly．Ihopemyadviceisofsomehelptoyou．Goodluck！Bestwishes!Yours,LiJie例2.2010花都一模假如你是李华。5月1日你被邀请参加广州“迎亚运，学英语”的英语晚会活动。那天活动非常丰富，请你按要求写一篇英文小报道，发表在《21世纪中学生版teens》上。内容包括：1.当天活动的安排；2.你参加的一至两项活动及原因；3.你对活动的感受。“迎亚运，学英语”英语晚会安排表6：30p.m-7：30p.m：听讲座：如何用英语介绍亚运（全体参加）7：40p.m-8：40p.m：观看表演和参加游戏（自由选择）1.英文歌2.英语小故事3.英语游戏注意：1．词数80左右（开头已写好，不计入词数）2．可适当添加细节，但不能透露个人的任何信息（例如：具体的学校和姓名等），否则不予评分。OnMay1st,ItookpartinanEnglishpartywhichwasheldtowelcomethe2010GuangzhouAsianGames.写作指导：写作指导：1.审题：本题要求写一篇报道。2.定要点：①活动的安排②你参加的一至两项活动及原因③你对活动的感受3.定人称：第一人称4.定时态：一般过去时【写作提纲：May1st...takepartin...anEnglishparty...heldtowelcome....the2010GuangzhouAsianGames,From()to()...speech...At...Englishperformance...Englishsongs,Englishstories,Englishgames...listen,watch...endat...excited...】范文：OnMay1st,ItookpartinanEnglishpartywhichisheldtowelcomethe2010GuangzhouAsianGames.Therewerealottodointheparty.From6:30p.mto7:30p.m,welistenedtoaspeechandlearnedhowtointroducetheAsianGamesinEnglish.At7:40,Englishperformancesbegan.TherewereEnglishsongs,EnglishstoriesandEnglishgamesandyoucouldchoosewhatyoulike.IlikelisteningtoEnglishsongsverymuch,soIwenttowatchtheyoungsingerssinginginEnglish.TheyallsangbeautifullyandIgavethemabighand.Thepartyendedat8:40p.m..IwasveryexcitedtotakepartintheEnglishparty.Ithinkthat’sagoodwaytoletpeoplelearnEnglishandknowaboutmoretheAsianGames. 2.提示作文提示作文写提示作文要注意两个方面：一是内容，二是表达。对内容的要求是包括所有要点，如果要点遗漏，就会失分。为防止遗漏要点，下笔前可以在题上标出1，2，3。最难的是表达。一般要求是用词准确，不出现语言错误；较高的要求是能够写出结构复杂的句子，熟练运用较好的短语和句型，并适当发挥。例1．2010天河区一模．很多学生都抱怨总是记不住学过的东西。请根据下面内容提示写一篇题为“Thewaystoimprovememory”的短文。词数80词，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不算入总词数内。要点提示：1.集中精神做事；(focusyourattention)2.要想记得长久，必须先理解好文章；3.及时复习，防止遗忘；4.多吃对大脑有益的食物，如牛奶、鸡蛋、鱼类等；5.多做运动、保证充足的睡眠和休息，这是增强记忆力的关键。写作指导：写作指导：从写作提示内容我们可以看到有很多条，所以在写作中为了让作文更具有连惯性，我们可以实用first,second,third这些连贯词要提示连接起来。同时在写作中我们一定要善于用情态动词来表达建议。写作中采用第二人称。【写作提纲：Memoryisimportant...waystoimprove...Firstly,focusone'sattention,Secondly,understand,rememberforalongtime...Thirdly,goover,intime...Fourthly,eatmorefood,eggs,milk,fish...Mostimportantly,domoreexercise,getenoughsleep...】范文：Memoryisveryimportantinourdailylifeandstudy.Herearesomewaystoimproveit.Firstly,whenyoustudy,youshouldfocusyourattentionanddon'tthinkaboutotherthings.Secondly,youshouldunderstandwhatyouarelearning.Ifso,youcanrememberthingsforalongtime.Thirdly,ifyougooverwhatyouhavelearnedintime,youwillnotforgetthethingseasily.Fourthly,eatmorefood,suchaseggs,milk,fish,theycanimproveyourmemory.Mostimportanly,youshoulddomoreexercise,getenoughsleepandenoughrestafterhardwork.It'sthekeytoimprovingyourmemory.Ifyoucandoso,youwillhaveagoodmemory.例2.2009海珠区一模目前，学生考试作弊现象严重，请围绕以下要点谈谈其中原因以及个人建议。内容包括：一、原因：1.考试太多;2.自身勤奋不够;3.把大量时间用在上网和玩游戏上;4.为了骗取家长和老师高兴。二、你的看法与建议。要求：1、字数80左右；2、围绕要点可适当发挥。【写作提纲：badhabit,pickup,cheatinexams...reasons,First,toomanyexams,Second,nothard-working,Third,wastetimeinplayinggames,Internet,notprepare,Finally,maketeachersandparentshappy...Inmyopinion,doharmtostudy,honest,diligent,besides,fewerexams...】范文：Atpresent,anumberofmiddleschoolstudentshavepickedupabadhabit—cheatinginexaminations.Therearefourmainreasons.First,schoolshavegivenstudentstoomanyexams,someofwhicharetoodifficult.Second,somestudentsarenothard-workingandtheydon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Third,theywastealotoftimeplayinggamesorsurfingtheInternet.Sotheyhaven’tenoughtimetopreparefortheexams.Finally,studentshavetodosotomaketheirteachersand parentshappy.Inmyopinion,cheatinginexamsdoesgreatharmtoourstudy.Westudentsshouldbehonestanddiligent,andonlyinthiswaycanweimproveourstudyandmakeprogress.Besides,ourteachersshouldofferusfewerexamsandmoretimetostudyforourselves.三.易错点清单学生在英语写作中常常出现很多错误。下面我们将对一些常见的错误进行归纳，并对一些典型的病句逐一加以剖析。1．不一致所谓不一致不只是指主谓不一致，还包括数的不一致，时态的不一致及其代词的不一致。如：OnceMaryhavemoney,shecandowhatshewanttodo.(have-has)2．修饰语错位英语和汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子中的不同位置，句子的含义可能发生变化。如：Shecanplaybasketball.Shetoocanplayfootball.Shetoocanplayfootball.–Shecanplayfootballtoo.3．句子不完整在口语中，交际双方可以借助手势、语气、上下文等理解不完整的句子。可是，书面语就不同了，句子的不完整会影响句子意义的表达。这种情况经常会出现在主句写完后，作者又想加些补充说明的时候。如：Therearemanywaystoknowtheinformation.Forexample,byTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.解析：本句的后半部分Forexample,byTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.是一个不完整的句子，应改为：Therearemanywaystoknowtheinformation.，forexample,byTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.4．词性误用词性误用常表现为：介词当动词用，形容词当副词用，名词当动词用。如：Shewenttoasleepaftershefinishedherhomework.解析：asleep是一个形容词，这里误用为一个动词。应改为：Shewenttosleepaftershefinishedherhomework.5．不连贯指一个句子前言不搭后语，或者结构上不通畅。如：Happiness,itisthemostimportantthingsintheworld.解析：Happiness与逗号后的it不连贯，另外，it与things在数方面不一致。应改为：Happinessisthemostimportantthingintheworld.四.模拟练习A篇.（2009花都一模）你作为交流学生到过加拿大。你的好朋友李华11月将作为交流学生到加拿大学习一段时间。她来信询问你有关在加拿大生活学习的情况。请你给她写一封英文的回信，向她提一些在加拿大生活的建议。内容包括：注意的方面建议天气寒冷多带暖衣服寄居在加拿大家庭1．进入别人房间前先敲门；2．使用电话前先询问；3．礼貌待人，多些交流；重要物品随身携带或存入银行注意：3．词数80左右（开头已写好，不计入词数）4．可适当添加细节，但不能透露个人的任何信息（例如：具体的学校和姓名等），否则不予评分。DearLihua,IamhappytohearthatyouaregoingtostudyinCanada.Butitseemsyouareworriedaboutlivingthere.B篇．（2009白云区一模）最近的一项研究调查表明，大约20%的学生有不吃早餐的习惯。请根据下列表格内容提示用英语写一篇短文。1.晚上学习太晚，想睡多一会而不吃早餐； 2.家长太忙无法照顾，直接给钱让孩子自己解决；3.一些男生把钱拿去玩游戏机，一些女生想保持苗条不吃早餐1.上课无精打采，成绩下降；2.身体越来越差；？（至少写出一条建议并说明原因）原后因果你的建议注意：1.词数80左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；2.不能透露个人任何信息（例如：学校和姓名等），否则不予评分。Asurveyshowsthatabout20%ofthestudentshaveabadhabitofnothavingbreakfast.That’sbecause3.（2010白云一模）以“ApersonIwillneverforget”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1.人物的外貌(至少描叙两个特征，例如年龄、身材、发型等)2.性格和爱好3.使你难忘之处(要求有具体事例)注意:1.词数80左右2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。ApersonIwillneverforgetD篇.（2010番禺区一模）网上交友已成为当代青年生活的一部分，它有助于青年人相互认识和了解，也有助于朋友之间相互帮助,共享忧愁。同时，网上交友也存在一些危险，令人担心。请以“IsMakingFriendsOnlineBadorGood?”为题，写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对网上交友的观点,开头语已给出。参考词汇：share分享；分担cheat欺骗Ismakingfriendsonlinebadorgood?Lifewithoutfriendsmustbeboring.E篇.（2010黄埔区一模）良好的生活习惯对我们的成长是非常重要的。你认为，良好的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢？请根据下面图中的要点提示，写一篇英语短文，发表您个人的观点。注意：1.词数80左右（文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数）；2.内容须包括图中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。5.积极锻炼身体…良好的生活习惯?1、必须吃早餐2、饮食健康，多吃水果、蔬3．早睡早4.饭前洗手WhatarethegoodlifehabitsIt’sveryimportantforustohavebetterlifehabits.范文：A篇.DearLihua,IamhappytohearthatyouaregoingtostudyinCanada.Butitseemsyouareworriedaboutlivingthere.NowIwanttogiveyousomeadvice.TheweatherinCanadainNovemberisquitecold,soyou’dbetterbringmorewarmclotheswithyou.BecauseyouwilllivewithanCanadianfamily,youhavetoremembernottoenterother’sroomwithoutknockingatthedoor.Beforeyouusethephone,pleaseaskthefamilyfirst.Everythingwillbefineifyouarepoliteandreadytotalktothem.Theywillenjoyhavingyouinthehouse.Ifyouhavesomethingimportant,suchasmoney,youshouldcarryitwithyouallthetimeoryoucankeepitinthebank.Hopeyouwillenjoyyourlifethere.Yours,LihuaB篇.Asurveyshowsthatabout20%ofthestudentshaveabadhabitofnothavingbreakfast.That’sbecausetheystudytoolateatnightandtheycansleeplongerwithoutbreakfastinthemorning.Andtheirparentsaretoobusytolookafterthem. Theyjustgivethemsomemoneyforbreakfast.Butsomestudentsspendthemoneyplayingcomputergames.Asaresult,theyfeelsleepyinclass.Theytakenointerestinstudying,theydoworseintheexams.Andtheirbodiesaregettingworseandworse.Tomakethethingsbetter,theyshouldhavebreakfasteverydaybecauseit’sgoodfortheirhealthanditcanhelpthemthinkbetter.Teenagers’healthshouldbeginwithgoodbreakfast.C篇.ApersonIwillneverforgetThepersonI’llneverforgetismyEnglishteacher.He’satallmanwiththickglasses.Helikessportsandoftenplaysfootballandbasketballwithus.He’shumorousandalwaysmakeshisclasseslivelyandinteresting.He’skindbutisstrictwithus.Heneverallowsustopretendthatweknowwhatwedon’tknow.Heoftentellsusthatit’snousememorizingnewwordswithoutunderstanding,Heoftenhelpsmewithmyproblems,somyEnglishhasgreatlyimprovedwithhishelp.IamverygratefultohimandIwillrememberhimforever.D篇.IsMakingFriendsOnlineBadorGood?Lifewithoutfriendsmustbeboring.It’sgettingmoreandmorepopulartomakefriendsonlinefortheyoungpeoplenowadays.Ithink,ontheonehand,itisgoodtomakefriendsonline.Itisconvenientforyoutoknoweachotherandhelpeachotherwhenyouhavesomeproblems.Andyoucansharealmosteverythingincludinghappinessandsadnesswithyourfriendswhereveryouare.Ontheotherhand,thereissomethingdangeroustomakefriendsonline.Sometimesyoumaybecheated.Andsomethingbadwillbedonetoyouifyourpersonalinformationisknownonline.So,inmyopinion,youcanmakefriendsonline,butdoremembertobecareful.E篇.It’sveryimportantforustohavegoodlifehabits.First,wemusthavebreakfast.Itcanprovideenergyforthebody.Second,wemusthaveahealthydiet.Itisnecessaryforustoeatwellsothatwecankeepfit.Also,wemusteatmorefruitandvegetablesandlessjunkfood.Third,wemustgotobedearlyandgetupearly.Fourth,we'dbetterwashourhandsbeforemeals.Atlast,Ithinkweneedtodosomesportstokeephealthytwiceaweek.It’sbetterforustostayoutratherthanstayathome.Ifwecandoso,wewillbehealthier.What'smore,weneedtorelaxourselvesafterbusywork.