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1、2014高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练(6)附参考范文短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2、只允许修改十处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。Ilikeeatingfruitandvegetableswhatareofgreatbenefittoourhealthy.Notonlyd
2、otheypreventusfromfallingintoill,buttheyhelpusloseweight.Iusedtohatevegetables,butfollowthedoctor’sadvice,Igraduallykickedthebadhabit.Justasanoldsayinggoing,“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway”.However,therearestillmanychildrendislikefruitandvegetables.Oncontrary,influencedbythisorth
3、atkindofadvertisement,manywerecrazyaboutjunkfood.Consequently,theybecomeweakerandweakerinsteadofgettingstrong.Inmyopinion,wemusttakeactiontochangethem.【答案】Ilikeeatingfruitandvegetableswhat(改为which/that)areofgreatbenefittoourhealthy(改为health).Notonlydotheypreventusfromfallinginto
4、(去掉into)ill,buttheyhelpusloseweight.Iusedtohatevegetables,butfollow(改为following)thedoctor’sadvice,Igraduallykickedthebadhabit.Justasanoldsayinggoing(改为goes),“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway”.However,therearestillmanychildrendislike(改为disliking或在dislike前加who)fruitandvegetables.On(加
5、the)contrary,influencedbythisorthatkindofadvertisement,manywere(改为are)crazyaboutjunkfood.Consequently,theybecomeweakerandweakerinsteadofgettingstrong(改为stronger).Inmyopinion,wemusttakeactiontochangethem.(改为it)第10页共10页I.表格提示类1.下表是对某中学高三一班50个学生健康问题的调查表。请根据表格内容,综述学生当前存在的健康问题,并就中学生如
6、何保持身心健康提出自己的建议。词数要求:120左右。问题类型学习焦虑逆反心理缺乏交往睡眠不足缺乏锻炼视力不佳人数352015402535比例70%40%30%80%50%70%Asisapparentlyshowninthechartabove,manymiddleschoolstudentshaveproblemsbothphysicallyandmentally,with70%ofstudentshavinglearninganxietiesaswellasbadeyesight,andalargerpercentagelackingsleep.C
7、omingnextisthelackofphysicalexercise.40%ofthestudentssurveyedwon'tobeytheirparentsorteachers.Stillfewerclaimednottohaveenoughcommunicationwithothers.Sofaras1amconcerned,westudentsshouldbalanceourphysicalexerciseandstudies.Justlikeasayinggoes:"AllworkbutnoplaymakesJackadullboy,"w
8、ithoutasoundbodyonecannotachieveanything;Howeve