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2、manycitydwellerswhotendtobework-orientedhaveafeelingthattheyarebecomingmoreandmoreisolatedfromeachother.Inmypointofview，thephenomenonofself-centeredlifestyleisaconsequenceoffiercecompetitionfromaquickrhythmicalsociety，butitisnecessarytofullyawarethatcuttingoffoursel

3、vesfromothersdoesconsiderablyharmus.Firstly，thefeelingofisolationisdetrimentaltoourhealth.Researcheshavefoundtheriskofpeopleundergreatpressureandlonelinessgettingaffectedbydiseaseismuchhigherthanthosewhoareinagoodmoodandwillingtomakefriends.Apartfromthedamagedonetoo

4、ne’shealth，lackingenoughcommunicationwilldiminishourcapacityforsocialinteraction.SomepeoplemayjustifythemselvesbyprovingthattheycangetintouchwiththeiroldfriendsthroughtheInternetwhichismoreconvenient.However，theydonotrealizethatstayingincontactwiththeirfriendsorrela

5、tivesbyelectronicmeansisabsolutelynotasubstituteforface-to-facetalkandoutdooractivities.Furthermore，separatingourselvesfromotherswillgraduallyturnusintoaninconsiderateandirresponsibleperson，whichwillposeaproblemtocodeofethics.Inrecentyears，therearemorereportsaboutse

6、niorcitizensbeingneglectedbytheirbusychildrenwhoconcentrateonworktoomuch.Sodon’tkeepourselvesinisolation.Thedistancebetweeneachpersoncanbeshortenedandamoreharmonioussocietymightbebuiltundertheconditionthateachindividualkeepsclosecontactwithhissurroundings.这篇学生的作文论点在

7、开头部分已清楚的提出，然后再中间段落提出三个论据，分别用连接词firstly…apartfrom…furthermore连接这三个论据，在论据扩展中，该学生使用了举例（inrecentyears,therearemorereportsaboutseniorcitizensbeingneglectedbytheirbusychildren…）,对比(somepeoplemayjustifythemselvesbyprovingthattheycangetintouchwiththeiroldfriendsthroughtheIn

8、ternetwhichis…however…)的论证方式，最后一部分再次重申论点（sodon’tkeepourselvesinisolation…）。并且，这篇论文在词汇上充分使用了同义词或同义词组的方法，把‘stopbeingisolated’的论点用许多不同的方式表达出来