部分老外范文评析

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1、部分美国范文评析出自：寄托天下作者:tomatoeggs--------------------------------------------------------------------------------Issue1"Wecanusuallylearnmuchmorefrompeoplewhoseviewswesharethanfrompeoplewhoseviewscontradictourown."disagreementcancausestressandinhibitlearning.

2、"Dowelearnmorefrompeoplewhoseideasweshareincommonthanfromthosewhoseideascontradictours?Thespeakerclaimsso,forthereasonthatdisagreementcancausestressandinhibitlearning.Iconcedethatunduediscordcanimpedelearning.Otherwise,inmyviewwelearnfarmorefromdiscourse

3、anddebatewiththosewhoseideasweopposethanfrompeople（此词用的不够those好）whoseideasareinaccordwithourown.在第一段，作者开门见山地表达自己的观点——conditionallydisagree.这一点值得大家借鉴。但由于写的仓促，依然有措辞的失误。Admittedly,undersomecircumstancesdisagreementwithotherscanbecounterproductivetolearning.

4、Forsupportingexamplesoneneedlooknofurtherthanatelevisionset.Ontoday'stypicaltelevisionorradiotalkshow,disagreementusuallymanifestsitselfinmeaninglessrhetoricalboutsandshoutingmatches,duringwhichopponentsvietohavetheirownmessageheard,buthavelittleinterest

5、eitherinfindingcommongroundwithorinacknowledgingthemeritsoftheopponent'sviewpoint.Understandably,neitherthecombatantsnortheviewerslearnanythingmeaningful.Infact,thesebattlesonlyservetoreinforcethepredispositionsandbiasesofallconcerned.Theendresultisthatl

6、earningisimpeded.在这第二段，作者作出某种程度的让步，注意Admittedly，……的用法，既省事有明了，是greAWA的典型用法。我们还可以发掘到作者用了比较多essay的常用词组，如，looknofurtherthansth.Manifestitself,havelittleinteresteitherin…orin…,findcommongroundwith,inacknowledgesth.,onlyserveto…这些用词均能让人倍感专业水平。Disagreementcanal

7、soinhibitlearningwhentwoopponentsdisagreeonfundamentalassumptionsneededformeaningfuldiscourseanddebate.Forexample,astudentofpaleontologylearnslittleabouttheevolutionofananimalspeciesundercurrentstudybydebatingwithanindividualwhosereligiousbeliefsystempre

8、cludesthepossibilityofevolutiontobeginwith.And,economicsandfinancestudentslearnlittleaboutthedynamicsofalaissez-faire（政府不干预的自由市场体系）systembydebatingwithasocialistwhoseviewisthatacentralizedpowershouldcontrolalleconomicactiv