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1、UnitOneTopicSentenceEnglishConventionsContrastwithChineseandNegativeTransferStudentWritingAnalysisAssignmentsContentWarmingUpPleasereadthefollowingcomposition,discusswithyourpartners,identifythemistakesandmakesomecomments.ALettertotheUniversityPresidentabouttheCanteenServiceonCamp
2、us(SelectedSamplefromCET4,2002)Jan,12th,2002DearPresident,I’mveryhappytobotheryoubywritingthisletter.Asanormalstudentofthisuniversity,IfinditmydutytowritetoyouabouttheCanteenserviceonCampus.Youknow,myhomeisfarfromhere,soeverydayIhavetoeatmyfootintheschoolfootroom.ButI’mnotsatisfyi
3、ng,thatistosayIthinkthecanteenserviceoncampusisnotsatisfiedwithme.Therearefivericeroomsinourcampus,buttherearemorethan10,000student.Soafterlessons,itistoocrowdedandwehavetowaitlonglongtimetogetourfan.Whenatthetime,mystomacheshave‘cu-cu’cry.Thepriceoffootisveryexpensive.Forexample,
4、wehavetopayoneyuantobuyamice,thoughitisdelicious.Andapieceofchickencost3yuan.Oh,myGoddess,howmuchisafullhen?Theserviceofriceroomisbad,too.Theunclesandauntsareverycool.Theirfacesarelikewood.Thereisnosmile.Youknow,whenIameating,Iwanttoseewaiterssmile,thatcanmakemyfootdelicious.Evenw
5、orseisthattheirhandsandclothesarealwaysdirty.OnceIsawanuncleputhisfingerinthesoup.Icried,“Payattentiontoyourfinger!”Heanswered,“Thesoupisnothot.”SodearPresident,Iwantyoutochangeallthesethings.Youmustbuildmorefootrooms,lowthepriceoffanandcai,andmaketheunclesandauntssmile.Thenwewill
6、beveryhappy.Ok.I’llgotobed.ThenexttimeI’llwritetoyouagain.YoursLiMingQuestionWhatmakesagoodessay?Inthepreviousunits,wearetaughtthatagoodessayisonefreeofgrammaticaloridiomaticalmistakes,onepolishedwithcertainfiguresofspeech.Wepayspecialattentiontothechoiceofwordsandphrases,sentence
7、structureandevenpunctuations.Inthisterm,wewillexamineagoodessayfromanotheraspect,organization.Agoodessayiswellorganizedanddevelopedwithunity.Thispartfocusesontheorganizationatparagraphlevel.Threemostimportantaspectsinvolvingorganizationwillbedealtwithindetail:topicsentence,support
8、ingdetailsandunityandcoherenceatp
