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1、Unit5RevealingnaturePeriod5Developingideas(Ⅱ)写作培优课写作素养提升观察日记(Observationaljournal)【写作指导】话题阐释观察日记是过去考察较少的书面表达话题,属于应用文的一种。但是,这个话题是高中课文的主要话题之一,内容涉及科学实验,环境保护等。文体概述观察日记通常包含三个部分,一般是以实验的三个时间节点或者步骤为主要的叙述对象,描述实验对象的具体特征或者状态。框架构建Week1The_______is_______._______hasbeen_____________________
2、____________.Week2Somethinghas__________________________.Itgrowsin__________________________.Week3Ithas_______to_____________.Itlookslike_____________________________________.【典题示例】假定你是学生李华,你在家种了一些蒜苗,请你围绕蒜苗的生长写一篇观察日记。要点如下:1.开始种的时间和状况;2.种下一周后的情况;3.收获时的情况。注意:1.词数100个左右;2.可以适当增加细节
3、,使行文连贯;3.框架已经给出。Step1谋篇立意Step2语言支架1.蒜瓣被种进土中,尖头朝上。①garliccloves_____②__________尖头③用with复合结构翻译句子:____________________________________________________________________蒜瓣sharpendsThegarliccloveshavebeenplantedintothesoil,withthesharpendsfacingup.2.浇水之后,把花盆挪到温暖的地方。要经常给蒜浇水。①container_
4、____②_________加水③用被动结构完成句子:__________________________________________________________________________________________花盆addwaterWaterhasbeenaddedandthecontainerwasputinawarmplace.Theclovesarebeingwateredregularly.3.蒜瓣上发出了小小的芽。芽绿绿的,长得很好。①___bud②_____sprout③用提示词翻译组句:______________
5、_________________________________________________________________芽发芽Asinglebudhassproutedfromeachofthegarliccloves.Thebudsaregreenandgrowwell.4.为了促进生长,花盆已经被移到有阳光的地方。①_____________Forbettergrowing②移动到有阳光的地方___________________③用现在完成时翻译句子:__________________________________________
6、________________为了促进生长movetoasunnyplaceForbettergrowing,thecontainerhasbeenmovedtoasunnyplace.5.蒜苗都已经长到了20厘米左右,绿油油的。到割苗的时候了。①20厘米高________________②到……时候了____________③翻译组句:_______________________________________________________________________________________20centimetrestallIt’
7、stimefor...Thegarlicsproutshavegrowntoaround20centimetrestallandarereallygreen.It’stimeforcutting.6.别担心,很快还会再长出来的。①别担心___________②快速生长____________③翻译组句:______________________________________________Don’tworrygrowquicklyDon’tworry.Itwillgrowquicklyagainaftercutting.Step3润色组篇Dayo
8、ne:Thegarliccloveshavebeenplantedintothesoil,withthesh