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1、2021年高考英语题型集训之话题写作03周围环境1.假如你是李华,今年暑假你和你的父母在美国旅行期间,在当地一家知名酒店住了一晚,你对住宿条件和服务都非常不满意。请你给酒店经理写一封投诉信,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.反映存在问题;3.提出改进建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dearmanager,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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3、________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Dearmanager,I’mwritingtocomplainaboutthepoorserviceyourhotelprovided.AftermyfamilycheckedinonAugust5th,wewereannoyedtofindtherewasnoaccesstotheInternetandnohotwateravailableafter10p.m.Worsestill,theroomattendantwasrudewhenwer
4、eportedtheseproblemstohim.Iknowyourhotelenjoysahighreputation,butitwasdisappointingthatyourhoteldidn’tofferhigh-qualityservice.Ithinkit’snecessarytoimprovetheroomserviceandgetyouremployeeswelltrainedsothatitwon’tfailothercustomers.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封酒店的
5、投诉信。【详解】第一步:审题体裁:应用文时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。结构:总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求:1.表明目的2.讲述相关情况1)反映存在问题。(problems)2)提出改进建议。(advice)第二步:列提纲(重点词组)complainabout;checkin;beannoyedtodo;available;enjoyahighreputation;disappointing;offer;roomservice;fail第三步:连词成句1.I’mwr
6、itingtocomplainaboutthepoorserviceyourhotelprovided.2.AftermyfamilycheckedinonAugust5th,3.wewereannoyedtofindtherewasnoaccesstotheInternetandnohotwateravailableafter10p.m.4.Iknowyourhotelenjoysahighreputation,5.butitwasdisappointingthatyourhoteldidn’tofferhigh-qualityserv
7、ice.6.Ithinkit’snecessarytoimprovetheroomserviceandgetyouremployeeswelltrainedsothatitwon’tfailothercustomers.根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)1.表文章结构顺序:Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系:Whatismore,Besides,Moreover
8、,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系:However,Onthecontrary,but,