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1、初中英语作文评语集【篇一:英语作文评语大全】英语作文激励性评语大全一、宏观性评价1.整体印象类评语super!excellent!perfect!wonderful!fantastic!marvelous!采用整体印象类评语对于起始阶段的学生有较好的激励作用,但若千篇一律使用此类评语,就会使学生无法正确认识自己的写作水平,最终导致教师的评语失去应有的作用。2.规范导知类评语beautiful.clear.wonderful.goodhand-writing.you’recarefulofusingpronunciation.gladtoseeyourimprovementinhan
2、dwriting.i’mexpectingclearer/morebeautifulhand-writingfromyounexttime.you’dbetterpaymoreattentiontowordorder.betterbemorecarefulofyourspelling.it’simportanttocomposeagraftbeforehand.3.情感调控类评语iappreciateyourhandwriting.youhaveagoodknowledgeofenglishproverbs.youarequiteawareofmakingmeaningfulsen
3、tences.youarericherthanothersincollectingandusingtypicalsentencesandidioms.i’mexpectinggreaterprogressfromyouinwriting.comeon.ifyouneedmyhelp,neverhesitatetocometome.警句:hardworkleadstosuccess.nottoadvanceistogoback.nooneiswithoutfaults.keepingisharderthanwinning.keepitup.二、微观写作技能方面的评语1.专项点拨类评语
4、it’spropertousetheproverbinpara.2quiteclever.youaregoodatusingattributiveclausesinyourwriting.the“struck”sentenceisperfectlyused.you’dbetteruse“thirdperson”inthefirstpara.it’sgoodtousethepasttenseinyourwriting.2.佳句欣赏类评语教师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性的符号(如e—excellent)或标识不同星级等。whatawonderfulsentenceusing“cover”.
5、it’sreallycleverofyoutousethisbeautifulsentence.theinvertedsentenceiswellwtitten.3.谋篇布局类评语agoodbeginning.aperfectending.well-organized.perfectly-expanded.thefirstpara.makesagoodbeginning.thelastpara.makesaperfectending.allthepointshavebeencovered.it’scleverofyoutouseatopicsentenceatthebeginnin
6、gofapara.it’swonderfultouseproperconjunctionsbetweensentences.youaregoodatdevelopingpara.youhavemadegreatprogressindevelopingpassage.iamgladtoseethesentenceconherenceinyourlastpara.betterpaymoreattentiontotherelationshipbetweensentences.it’sreallywonderfultostart/endyoursentenceswithadverbials
7、.在起始年级应侧重对学生写作行为规范的引领,重在对学生进行词语方面的引导;对高年级学生则应侧重对文章的结构、行文的逻辑、句子的变化等方面的指点和引导。虽然这些评语对我们大部分学生来说不太适合,以为他们连老师评他们什么都看不懂,但我们平时对作文的批改确实没做到这么仔细,有很大启发。备注:此文引自豆丁网!【篇二:初中英文评语模板】wangjunjieyouhavemadesomeprogressinyourenglishthisterm.workinghardinthem
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