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1、好句:1.Hewenttohisneighbour’shouseasfastashecould.(郭诗琪)2.Hephoned“119”asfastashecould.(梁雁仙)3.Theneighbourandthefire-fighterswereverythankfultoJack.(恩裕)1.Jackfeltreallyhappybecausehecouldhelpedotherswhoneedshelp.(煜华)2.ThoughJackandhisneighbourwereverytired,theydidn’tgiveupputtingoutthefireanddid
2、everythingtheycouldtohelpthefirefighters.(婉颖)1.(Withoutthinkinganything),herushedtothetelephoneatonceandcalled“119”forhelp.(梓宇)1.Henearlyjumpedoutofhisskin.(国华/笑华)2.WhatabraveboyJackis!(霍俊杰)改正错误:host—ownerstrongfire1.Thefirefighterssaid“whatahelpfulboyJackis!”2.Jackcalledthefirefighterbyphone
3、atonce3.Whenthefirefighterarrivedthehousewhichwasonfire,thefirehasbeenputout.afterthis,thehost……1.Heranandcallforhelptothefirefighterswithphone.2.Itwasalotofthickfirecomingoutofthehouse…..1.Hegotupatonceandphonecallthefirefightertocallforhelp.2.Jack’sneighbourwasthankshealot.3.Hisneighboursay
4、thankyoutohim.1.Jackwasatoncephonethefirefightertoaskforhelp.2.Thefirefighterweresaidtohim“Howkindofyou”3.“Howgoodaboy!”4.“Whatabravepeople!”1.Thefirewasburningseriously2.Intheend,thefirewasputout.BensaidtoJack“Thankyouforhelpmealot”thefirefightersaid“youaresuchacleverboy!”ButJackthought“Nots
5、aythanks,whatanunforgettabledayitis!”
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