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1、EnglishWritingHowcanweorganizethepassage?约30词的概括要点（1）：根据你或你身边人的生活经历，当所面对的事实无法改变时，是否应该改变自己？要点（2）：简述一个改变自己的例子要点（3）：你认为有时候改变自己，才能最终改变属于自己的世界吗？Para.1Para.4Para.2Para.3ReadthereadingbrieflyPara.2Agreeornot?Whenwefindtheenvironmentunchangeable,weshouldchangeourselves.Iagreewiththissayingbecausewecan
2、changeourselveseasilybutthefactsareusuallydifficulttochange.(表达一种观点，然后说我同意)（直接表明同意与否）观点：是否应该改变自己提醒：简述原因前提：你所面对的事实无法改变Bytellingastoryaboutamanwhowantstomoveamountainbecausehewouldgototheothersideofit,andafriendofauthorwhoachievedsuccessinhisownway,thewriterwantstotellusthatweshouldlearntochange
3、ourselves.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldchangeourselveswhenmeetthefactthatwecan’tchange.Thestoryofauthor’sfriendremindsmeofasimilarexperience.WhenIwasinGrade1ofseniorschool,Ireallycan’tacceptthewayofmymathteachertaughtme.Ialwayshopedthathecanchangehisteachingwayaccordingtomywill.However,itmakesn
4、osense.Mymathteachershouldbefitforallclassmates,notjustme.Itseemsthatitismewhoshouldchange.Therefore,Imadeanattempttochangemyself.Finally,Ididitsuccessfullyandadaptedthewayofteachingofmymathteacher.So,inmyopinion,sometimesweshouldlearntochangeourselves,onlyinthiswaycanwefindtheworld,whichbelon
5、gstoourselves.Para.3Anexample简述一个改变自己的例子注意1：示例常用什么时态？Ithinkofmycousin,healwayscomplainedaboutEnglishlearningandseldomworkedhardinitbefore.Asaresult,Hefellbehindtheothersinhisclass.LaterherealizedtheimportanceoflearningEnglishandhedevelopedagoodattitude.SohepracticedlisteningandspeakingEnglisha
6、fterclass.AndhekeptanEnglishdiaryeveryday.Finally,hebecameoneofthetentopstudentsinhisclass.过去时不可取。只需交代清楚事情的起因、经过和结果。恰当处理一下是重在“因”“果”还是“过程”。注意2：示例用“流水账”可取吗？Para.4Youropinions总结论点：你认为有时候改变自己，才能最终改变属于自己的世界吗？Ithink,sometimeswemustchangeourownattitudebeforewewanttomakeachangeoftheworld,forinthiswayw
7、ecanbroadenourhorizonsandachieveaneventualchangeoftheworldaroundus.提醒：发表看法。简述理由。Whenwefindtheenvironmentunchangeable,weshouldchangeourselves.Iagreewiththissayingbecausewecanchangeourselveseasilybutthefactsareusuallydifficulttochange.Ith
