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1、初中英语书面表达篆中桂文峰Teenagers’colorfullifeWestudy.Welikelisteningtomusic.Weplaycomputergamesforlong.Welikereadingbooks.WeoftenplaySports.WegotoKFC.Sometimeswetravel.Sometimeswestayupstudying.Teenagers’healthylifeWestudyallday.Welikelisteningtomusic.Weplaycomputergamesforlong.Welikereadingbo
2、oks.WeoftenplaySports.WegotoKFC.Sometimeswetravel.Sometimeswestayupstudying.colorfulhealthy认真审题,找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢?国际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork用简单的句子或短语列出文
3、章要点。列写作第二步根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点如何度假调查报告倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravelAlotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.列Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeop
4、lework.Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.aniceheadanicetailanicebody加加首尾,使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂亮。写作第三步:Second,weshouldkeepquietinthelibrary.First,wehavetowearouruniformstogotoschool,t
5、houghmostofusdon’tlikethematall.Everyschoolhasitsownrulesforstudents.Wehavemanyschoolrulestofollowinourdailylife.What’smore,weoughttoreturnbooksontime.Ourschoolrulesaregoodforus,Iwilltrymebesttofollowthem.Third,wemustdolotsofhomework.321465Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveya
6、ndhereisoursurveyreport.Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Thepeoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次清晰,各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步:1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,notonly…butalso,ne
7、ither…nor;2.表示选择:or,either…or;3.表示转折:but,however,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand;7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),nex
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