书面表达练习2.ppt

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1、PolishupYourcomposition你的很多同学一直为他们的父母总是不经允许就翻看他们的日记而感到苦恼。请你根据以下提示，用英语给校英语报写一篇文章，帮助同学们解决这个苦恼。同学们的苦恼父母不经允许翻看日记父母如此做的原因（提出一至两点）父母如此做的危害（提出一至两点）解决的办法（至少提出两条建议）Teachingaim:Improvestudents’abilityofwritingbypolishingupthesentences.1.Parentssearchfortheirchildren’sdiarieswithoutallowed.2.Theydon’twanttoot

2、hersknowthem.3.Thereasonwhyparentsdoitproperlybecausetheywanttoknowwhetherwearehappyandcomfortableinschool.4.Theirparentsdothatcanmaketheirchildrennotbelievethem.5.Parentslookchildren’sdiariesisalsoharmful.6.Ofcourse,harmisnotavoided.词汇误用句式错用双谓语汉式英语……Westudents’worryisthatparentsreadourdiarieswhent

3、heyarenotallowedtodothis.Manyreasonsleadtoparentsdoingthis.Theyreadourdiariestounderstandusbetter.Aftertheyknowourthoughtsandfeelingsinthediary,theycanhelpussolvemanytroublesindailylife.…..weshouldtakemanymeasurestosolvetheproblem.Forus,weshouldtalkwithourparentsaboutourthoughts.Forparents,parentss

4、houldgainchildren’spermissiontoreadthediaries.Itisthebestwaytoimproverelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren.15-16阅读评分(节选某同学首尾部分)高考英语作文第五档(很好)要求:(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。目的。5.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构(complexsentencestructures)或较高级词汇(advancedwords)所致

5、；具备较强的语言运用能力。Tip1UsingtheadvancedwordsWestudents’worryisthatparentsreadourdiarieswhentheyarenotallowedtodothis.Manyreasonsleadtoparentsdoingthis.Theyreadourdiariestounderstandusbetter.Aftertheyknowourthoughtsandfeelingsinthediary,theycanhelpussolvemanytroublesindailylife.…..Westudents’worryisthatpa

6、rentslookthroughourdiarieswithoutpermission.Therearemanyreasonsleadingtoparentsdoingthis.Theyreadourdiariesforthepurposeofunderstandingusbetter.Aftertheyknowourthoughtsandfeelingsfromthediary,theycanassistustosolvemanytroublesindailylife.…..weshouldtakemanymeasurestosolvetheproblem.Forus,weshouldta

7、lkwithourparentsaboutourthoughts.Forparents,parentsshouldgainchildren’spermissiontoreadthediaries.Itisthebestwaytoimproverelationshipbetweenparentsandchildren.We’dbettertakemanymeasurestosolvetheproblem.For