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1、作文专题（八）申诉信Step1Sample大声朗读并思考文章结构人称时态及过渡词DearManager,   IamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionaboutthequalityofthedigitalcameraIboughtlastFridayatyourstore.Duringthefivedaysthecamerahasbeeninmypossession,problemshaveemergedoneafteranother.Foronething,thescreenisalwa

2、ysblack,makingthecameranodifferentfromatraditionalone.Foranother,thebatteryisdistressingasitsupportsthecamera’soperationforonlytwohours.Therefore,Iwishtoexchangeitforanothercameraordeclarearefund.Iwillappreciateitifmyproblemreceivesdueattention.                  

3、                                       Yours,                                                         LiMing1.书信类型？2.围绕什么写？3.三个层次开头：中间：结尾：4.人称、时态？5.过渡词？Step2.UsefulSentencePatterns开头1.Iamwritingthislettertocomplainabout…2.Iamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfaction/disa

4、ppointment/concernabout…3.IregrettoinformyouthatIwasnotatallsatisfiedwithyourservice.4.IamsorrythatIhavetowritethisletterofcomplaintbecause…5.Iwishtodrawyourattentionto…6.Thisletteristonotifyyouthatthepoorlivingconditioninmyapartmentshouldbebroughttoyourattention

5、.中间1.Theefficiencyofyourworkingstaffleavesmuchtobedesired.2.Thereservationserviceintherestauranthasprovedmostunreliable.3.Iamtotallydisappointedtofindthatsomeofthewaitersinyourpubbehavesorudely.4.ThisismorethanIcouldbear/tolerate.5.Iwasshockedattheunpleasantsitua

6、tioninmyflat.结尾1.Wetrustthatyouwillconsiderthismatterseriouslyandmakeanefforttopreventtherecurrenceofthiskind.2.Weshallbegladtohaveyourexplanationandtoknowwhatstepsyouaregoingtotakeinthewayofcompensatingforthedamage/loss.3.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyouwould…4.I

7、wouldbegratefulifyoucould…5.We’relookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.6.Yourpromptattentiontothismatterwillbeappreciated.7.Weshouldbeobligedifyouwouldlookintothematterandletusknowwhatyouproposetodo.Step3.OutlayDear_______,　Iam_(自我介绍).IfeelbadtotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatI

8、havetomakeacomplaintabout_____.Thereasonformydissatisfactionis___(总体介绍).Inthefirstplace,___(抱怨的第一个方面).Inaddition,___(抱怨的第二个方面).Underthesecircumstances,Ifindit_