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1、托福满分范文很多托福考试的考友总是在感叹,这个世界上能拿到的好作文实在是太少了,其实很多时候不是这些作文少,而是很多考友没有努力去发掘这些作文。这里小编搜集到了一些托福满分范文,推荐给各位考友!拿这些满分作文都该做些什么呢?1看整篇结构,要看一看这些作文的结构是怎么展开的。要仔细的读一下,这些作文每一段的写作目的,到底是支持还是反对,以及哪几段支持,哪几段反对。2看段落结构,要仔细分析在一段之中,每一句话所起到的作用。到底是主题句,还是例证。3看句型多样性,要仔细想想这些作文每一句话说话的分寸。4比对自己的写法。看每一句话的时候,脑中都要
2、思考,这句话中文是什么意思,如果是我自己来写,我会怎么写!并且在下一篇自己的作文中替换为这些用法。5用词多样性和准确性。6如果有需要的话,再背一下是最好的了,没有输入就没有输出吗!比女口:Inthiscase,computerasarepresentativeofmoderntechnologyplaysanegativeroleinlearninginformation.这句话,我们自己很有可能写的就是,Inthiscase,computerthatisaequipmentofmoderntechnologyhaveabadeffect
3、inlearninginformation・这里的差距就很十分明显了!因此,当给你美的东西,还要有一双发现美的眼睛!托福满分范文(一)IndependentWriting:Doesmoderntechnologyhelpstudentslearnmoreinformationandlearnitmorequickly?Marvelousasitlooksatfirstsight,moderntechnologydoesnothelpstudentslearninformationatagreaterspeedandwithhigheref
4、ficiencyinmostcases;oritcouldworktowardstheoppositedirectionwhichledstudentstolosetheirinitiativetolearnandexplore.Firstofall,onepropertyofmoderntechnologyislatentlyharmfultoanylearningmind–itdistracts.Onethingwefeelaboutwhenwearesearchingforinformationonlineisthatt
5、heinternet,asanoutstandingexampleofmoderntechnologyandevenregardedastheinnovatorofeducation,providesuswithnotonlyrelevantresultstomakeuseof,butalsoexternallinkstoclick・MorethanonceIturnedonmycomputertocheckschoollibraryforresources^butendedupwatchingYoutubevideos.Inthisca
6、se,computerasarepresentativeofmoderntechnologyplaysanegativeroleinlearninginformation.Wedoacquiremoreinformationwiththeconvenienttool,yetmostofthemareirrelevantandintheendprocrastinatingwouldlowerourlearning.Also,studentswouldeasilybecomedisorientedinthehugeseaofinformati
7、on.Althoughmoderntechnologycouldequipuswitheasyaccesstoinformation,thehugeamountofresourceswouldactuallyleaveusdiscombobulated.Therefore,itisonlywepossessinformationmorequicklyratherthanwelearnitmorequickly.AnillustratingexampleismyexperiencewithaHKdigitallibrarywhichstor
8、esalmostallthebooksIdesire.AtfirstIenjoyeddownloadingthemfromthedatabase,however,onemonthlaterIe
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