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1、Myhometown:Chaoyang写作讲评高分作文的特点1.外在美观2.结构明了3.用词高级4.句式精彩5.过渡自然从基本功练起写简单句写并列句写复合句句子扩展1.Theboygotup.2.Theboygotupat7:00.3.Theboygotupat7:00inthemorning.5.Theboyhadbreakfastquickly.6.TheAmericanboygotupat7:00inthemorningandhehadbreakfastquickly.7.Hismothercookedthebre
2、akfastforhim.8.TheAmericanboygotupat7:00inthemorningandhehadbreakfastquicklywhich/thathismothercookedforhim.4.TheAmericanboygotupat7:00inthemorning.1.Iboughtmysisterapresent.Shedidn’tlikeit.Iboughtmysisterapresent____shedidn’tlikeit.2.Hewastired.Hewenttobed.Hewas
3、tired,_____hewenttobed.3.Istillremembertheday.IfirstcometoBeijingonthatday.Istillremembertheday_____IfirstcametoBeijing.butsowhen学以致用：用适当的连词合并句子4.Heisanhonestman.Henevertellslies.Heisanhonestman____henevertellslies.Heisanhonestman,____nevertellslies.andwho注意事项一：避
4、免重复，学会用各种短语和从句表达意义相近的句子。2.Ilikereadingwhileheenjoyssinging.1.Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.3.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.2.Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.1.Ilikereading.Helikessinging.我喜欢阅读，他喜欢唱歌4.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.注意
5、事项二：善于使用过渡词，使文章浑然一体。a).递进then,besides,thatistosay…b).转折however,yet,otherwise…c).对比justas,comparedto/with…d).因果because(of),so,sothat,asaresult…e).总结inaword,allinall…f).顺序firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally…ontheonehand,ontheotherhand,【范文欣赏】Everyonehopestobeingoodheal
6、th.Buthow?Herearesomewaystokeephealthy.Ontheonehand,youneedabalanceddiet.Itisbettertoeatfreshfruitandvegetablesbecausetheyhavealotoffibreandvitamins.Don’teatthefoodwhichcontainstoomuchsugarandfat,likebutter,cheese,coffeeandchocolate.Fatandsugarmakepeopleputonweig
7、hteasily.Ontheotherhand,goodlivinghabitsareveryimportant.Youshoulddoregularexercisetobuildupyourbody.Besides,enoughrestisnecessaryforyourhealth.Youneed8hours’sleepanightanddon’tworktoohard.Smokingisabadhabit,soneversmoke.Inaword,healthyfoodandgoodlivinghabitsareg
8、oodwaystokeephealthy.注意事项三：恰当的运用谚语，名言。DearMom,Iwanttothankyoubecause…Thereisasaying,“Godcouldn’tbeeverywhereandthereforehemademothers”.Mom,Iwanttothankyou.综合训练
