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1、审题问题解决型1.现象描述2.问题阐述,原因分析3.解决对策对立观点型1.现象描述+指出争议2.支持一方,观点和理由3.反对一方,观点和理由4.个人选择+观点破题第一步:现象描述,开门见山补充:1+2原则,一句主题,两句扩展现象描述法一句主题:直接指向主题(来源于提纲);一句话思路:<时间状语>+<很多的/越来越多的>+<人/物>+<喜欢/倾向于/有可能>+<做某事/怎么样>两句扩展:与现象相关的人,事或物(代表性)Inthedayandage,agrowingnumberofyoungstersareshowin
2、gtheirpreferencetotheonlineshopping.Generally,theyoungandtheirfriendsareeagertoavarietyofinformationaboutonlineshopping.Muchofsparetimeandpocketmoneyareconsumedinselectingandpurchasingfashionablestuffs,includingclothes,digitalproducts.OnlinePaymentInthisdayand
3、age,ahostofpeople,especiallyyoungonesarelikelytouseonlinepaymentwhenshopping.Foritsconvenience,manyyoungstersareeagertopurchasedailynecessities/essentials,suchasbooks,clothes,electricaldevicesthroughinternet.Onlinepaymenthasmanybenefitsoverpaymentincash.(主题词在某
4、一方面有好处)Firstly/inthefirstplace,comparedwithtraditionalwaysofpayment,it’sveryconvenient.WhatyouneedtodoisjusttogetaccesstotheInternetinsteadofgoingout.Secondly,youmaycanceladealyouhadmade.However,wecannotneglectitsdemerits,it’llbedifficulttoprotectthesafetyofon
5、linepayment.Afterall,therearealwayssomehackerswaitingforvictims.对策:校园:校方管理,学生(思维+行为),教师(上课方式,责任心)热点:政府(政策,经费)公众(意识和行为)Asacollegestudent,inmyview/point,frommypoint/standIlikeonlinepaymentbutIexpectthateffectiveprecautionsshouldbetakentoensurethesafety.Thus,rele
6、vantgovernmentdepartmentsshouldissueregulationsandrules,andbuildagoodinternetenvironmenttoensuresafeonlinepayments.Onlyinthiswaycanonlinepaymentbecomeareallybetterchoiceforcustomerswhenshoppingonline.四级食品安全第一段:当下越来越多的消费者在日常购物和外出就餐时,经常会碰到质量不过关的食品,一旦不小心摄入,很有可能会产
7、生一些不适的症状,甚至有可能危及到生命,比如说2008年的三鹿奶粉。Currently,anincreasingnumberofconsumersarelikelytoencountersomeunqualifiedfoodswhentheyareshoppingoreatingoutside.Oncepeopleeatthese,theymaysufferfromsomediseaseorevenfacethethreatsoftheirlives.第二段:原因分析,许多的不良厂家为了追求利益,私自在生产过程中采
8、用不合格或质量很低的原料,并且添加一些有害物质;其次,许多的有害食品的价格非常低廉,吸引一些消费者购买;第三,当前的监管机构对于食品企业的监管不严,惩罚力度不大。Threefactorsarelistedbelowtoexplainthephenomenon—foodsecurity.Firstandforemost,numerousfoodmanufact