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1、Parents'choiceforkids参考范文:Asisgraphicallydepictedinthecartoon,ayounggirlistalkingwithhermother.Shesaysironically,"Goodnewsmom!Iwasacceptedtothecollegeofyourchoice!"Then,hermothersmilesandseemscontentwiththisresult.Apparently,thecartoonaimstorevealthefactthatamajorityofmodern
2、parentsplayanincreasinglynegativeroleintheirchildren'sgrowth・第一段三句话,描写图中大体现象、细节描写对话内容和人物反应、揭示图画的目的。Thereareseveralpossiblereasonsaccountableforthisphenomenon(中心句).Tobeginwith,familyingrowingnumbershasonlyonechild;therefore,parentsoftentimesfocusalltheirattentionsonthatchilda
3、ndexertmuchpressureonhimorher(原因一).Moreover,numerousparentsintendtorealizetheirunfulfilleddreamsbylettingtheirchildrenlearnwhattheyfailedtolearnandapplyforthecollegebywhichtheyfailedtobeaccepted,becausetheyhavebecomericherandtheybelievethattheyhavethepowertomakewhattheywante
4、dandwantcometruenow(原因二)•Forinstance,myuncleusedtobeapoormanandhisdreamthatonedayhewouldbecomeaviolinistwasbrokenbecauseoflackofmoney.Buthemadeafortunebysellingcoals,andthenforcedhisson,myyoungerbrothertopracticeplayingviolin.Mybrotherwasahugefanofsports,butnowhehastoplayvio
5、lineverydayunwillinglyandofterquarrelswiththeirparents(举例:原来■然后•结局).Tosumup,itisunreasonableforparentstocontroltheirchildren'slife(总结句).Inordertohelpthemgrowhappilyandhealthily,parentsaresupposedtocommunicatewiththeirkidsaboutwhattheyarereallyinterestedin(建议一,目的句型)•Meanwhile
6、,itisabouttimethatparentslettheirkidsmaketheirownchoices(建议二,"是时候”句型).Onlyinthesewayswillchildrengrowinapsychologicallyhappyenvironmentandrealizetheirowndreams•Computer参考范文:Asisgraphicallydepictedinthecartoon,modernlifehasbeendominatedbycomputers.Nomattertheyoungmanisintheof
7、fice,athome,andinhissparetime,theonlyfriendhehasisacomputer.Evenwhenhesleeps,whatisinhisdreamisstillthecomputer.Apparently,thecartoonaimstorevealthefactthatthecomputerhasbeguntoplayanegativeroleinthemodernlife・第一段三句话,第一句大体描写,第二句细节描写,第三句话揭示图画目的。Thereasonswhymodernpeoplearetie
8、dupwithcomputersareasfollows.Tobeginwith,theyhavebecomeincreasinglybusierin