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1、智课网TOEFL备考资料托福写作考试中的常见错误摘要：托福写作考试中的常见错误，下面是小马过河为同学们搜集整理的托福写作考试中常见的错误，供同学们参考。1.用词不当学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。•Intheshow,ifparticipatorsanswertwentyproblemsthatthehostmentionedcorrectly,theywillgetfivehundredsthousandU.S.dollarsasaprize.——problems应改为questions2.拼写错误这里的拼写错误不是
2、指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。•Inconclusion,issueofwhetherparentsarethebestteachersisacomplexone,requiringsubjectivejudgement,consequently,therearenoeasyorcertainanswers.——judgement应改为judgment3.乱用大词Firstofall,childrencanearnmoneyfromtheirjobs,althoughthereisn’ttoomuch,buttheywillkeeptheirsalarygin
3、gerliness.这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题：1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;2)although和but是不能连用的;3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;4.表达中式Thesecondargument-itmighthavebeennoticedbyothers-isthatinsomeoccasion,itisquitedifficulttocompareparentstoteachersbecauseparentsareakindofpeople,teachersareaki
4、ndofvocation.句子中划线部分的表达过于中式化。5.表意重复•Theyshockedtheirfriends,devastatedtheirfamilies,crushedtheirbestfriends.前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。•Theshowissocompellingbutattractive.•compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。6.固定用法错误•Tosomeextends,Iagreewiththeauthor’sgeneralassertionthatifparentsalsohaveacomprehe
5、nsivesenseofprofessionalknowledge.——Tosomeextends应改为Tosomeextent7.例证夸张•Forexample,whenadoctorfacesapatientwhohasgotcancer,thedoctorcannottellthetruth,forthetruthmaycausethepatient’simmediatedeath.虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。8.成分多余•AccordingtoacomprehensiveinvestigationwhichiscarriedoutbyChineseA
6、cademyofSocialSciencesshowsthatthereisanincreaseinthenumberofuniversitystudentswhoaretakingpart-timejobs.该句中的showsthat是多余的成分。9.词性混乱•However,thequestionssuchas"Haveyoueverregrettedmarryingyourhusband"maybeveryprivacyandembarrassingly.句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。10.文体不正式•
7、Alloftheplayersgonnatotellthetruthinattempttowin$500,000.——gonna过于口语化。•Inaddition,Ithinkpeopleshoudn’talwaystellthetruthtoothers.——在托福作文中尽量不要用缩写，这里应该写shouldnot。11.两个独立句子间无连词•Anotherpointisthatyoungpeoplearemoreaggressiveandenergetic,andit’ssu
