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1、我对节日的看法MyViewontheSameAmountofHo.大学英语作文MyVieeAmountofHolidayAsevendaylongholidayhasfloyhappyhoursduringthevacation,I'vebeenlookingforeseemedtohaveenjoyedthevacation,too.Then,isitfairthatpeoplehavethesameamountofholidaysregardlessoftheiroccupations?Nevertheles
2、s,divergentvieergeonthematterinquestion.Somepeopleareoftheopinionthatlaborersshouldhavethesamelengthofholiday.Theyholdthevieeamountofleisuretimemayeliminatetheunfairnessamongpeopleightbeupsetpsychologicallyifotherayseemtobeanattractiveidea,butitdoesn'tbearmuc
3、hanalysis.Tobegineneededtorefreshtheirphysicalconditionvaries.Forexample,bluecollarayorementallystressed.Unabletooretimetopullthroughthementaledifferentresponsibilitiesandhavedifferentdegreesofpressure.Secondly,differenttasksanddutiesarerequiredfordifferentpr
4、ofessions,resultinginthevarietyofholidayperiodsforpeopleindifferenteemployeescannothavetheirlegalholidaysandevenhavetoe,suchaspolicemen,constructionornent;otheress.Evenforsomepeopleinthesameoccupation,theycannothavethesameholidaysentitledtothemduetomanyfactor
5、soutofhumancontrol,suchasspecialassignments,andhealthconditionsetc,thennottosaypeopleindifferentfields.(转载自中国评价网.nseac.)Supposeonths'holidayinayear.Thenfactorieshavetoemployconsiderablymoreeofthemareenjoyinghappyholiday.That'sobviouslyagainsttheprinciplesofdo
6、ingbusinessatloetovisitthosetouristresortsleisurely.Itgoesentofscienceandtechnologyalloaketheirprograms,doctorsgivepatientsdiagnosisandtutorsgivestudentsinstructionsathomethroughopticalfabriccableconnections.That'shoSOHObore.Inotherepeopleneedmoretimetorecove
7、rfromthefatigueoflabor.Andsomepeoplecannotmakeendsmeetthoughtheyholidayisae.Itisneitherpossiblenornecessaryforpeopleeamountofholidayoff.Holidayisakindofbonus,justastheChineseidiomgoes,distributionaccordingtowork.简评冯佳莹同学的这篇作文思路清晰,分析丝丝入扣,是一篇非常优秀的议论文。这篇作文的开头清新自然
8、,通过自己对国庆假期的感受,进而联想到其他各行各业的人的想法,引出了本文的主题,显得毫不做作。写这篇作文时,显然进行了深入的思考,因而分析有理有据,闪烁着的真知灼见和思想火花。的语言很出色,句式长短交错,段落层次分明,句与句之间以及句群之间的衔接都非常清晰,倾向于使用then,that,those等连词和代词来衔接上下文,而没有使用过多的定语从句,既使句式的长度得到了控制