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1、（1）FirePreventiononCampus1.前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失2.分析火灾发生的原因3.作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生●审题概述●这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段，主要概述；第二段，说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。【范文】FirePreventiononCampusPeoplearealarmedbythesuccessionofcampusfiresinrecentyears.In

2、eachoftheseaccidents,heavycasualtieswerereported–houseswereburneddown,studentslosttheirlives,andpropertiesweredamaged.Facedwithsuchachillingfact,peoplekeepasking,“Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?”Abriefsurveyofthemrevealsthathumanfactorsstillprovetobetheleadingcaus

3、es.Forexample,threeofthesefireswerecausedbythestudents’useofelectricwater-heaters.Asstudentsoftenleavetheheatersunattended,therisksareratherhighshouldthewaterinthebottleboildrywhilenooneisaroundtoturnoffthepower.Inothercases,fireswerealsocausedbystoves,candles,cigarettebutts,

4、etc.   Sincemostofthesedisasterscouldhavebeenpreventedifproperprecautionshadbeentaken,studentsshouldbebettereducatedontheimportanceandmeasuresoffirecontrol.Thefollowingthreeremindersareofparticularimportanceforusstudents:First,learnhowtouseafireextinguisher.Second,double-chec

5、kcandles,heaters,stovesandotherelectricappliances,andmakesuretherearenoopenflamesbeforeleavingrooms.Lastly,donotsmokeinthedorm.◇第一段思路点评：概述并引入下文◇语言点提示：（1）此句Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?常可作为过渡句，引出下文（2）注意描述有关火灾客观事实，多使用被动语态，如arealarmedby，werereported，wereburneddown，

6、weredamaged，Facedwith。◇第二段思路点评：论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器，还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂◇语言点提示：electricwater-heaters电热水器◇第三段思路点评：详述预防火灾的三点措施，注意使用连接词语first,second,lastly。◇语言点提示：takeprecautions采取预防措施fireextinguisher灭火器（2）EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts1.校园盗窃案件时有发生2.物品被盗的原因3.学生如何加强防盗

7、意识●审题概述●这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。【范文】EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts“Ifyoudon’twanttowakeupandfindyouhavenopantstowear,you’dbetterputthemoninsleep,”goesapopularjokeamongstudents.Obviously,campustheftshavebecome

8、increasinglyannoyingastheyoccurfarmoreoftenthanbefore.Anditseemsthat