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1、Appearance(外貌)Personality(性格)tall/shortoutgoing/quietstraight/curlyhairfunny/seriousbeautiful/uglyangry/friendlyfat/thincareful/carelesswearglasseshappy/unhappy…hard-working/lazy…Sheusedtobe…,butnowsheis…Sheusedtohave…,butnowshehas…Makesentences.quiet…outgoing…outgoingquietserious
2、friendlysilentactivelonghairshorthairstraighthaircurlyhair…假设你是Tom,进入九年级以来你在各个方面都有了很大变化。请根据表格提示写一篇短文,说说你的变化。过去(inthepast)现在(Now)胖瘦文静外向起床晚,上课迟到早起读英语,按时到校上课说话,不听课认真听讲,每天记笔记晚上不学习,抄别人的作业晚上在家认真学习,经常和其他同学打架总是帮助同学一、审题:人称、时态、体裁过去(inthepast)现在(Now)usedtobefatamthin二、列要点:根据提示和要求列出英文要点二、列要点
3、根据提示和要求列出英文要点过去(inthepast)现在(Now)usedtobefatthinusedtobequietoutgoingusedtogetuplate,usedtobelateforclassgetupearlytoreadEnglish,gettoschoolontimeusedtotalkwithothersinclass,didn’tusetolistentotheteacherslistentotheteachercarefully,takenoteseverydaydidn’tusetostudyatnight,usedtoco
4、pyothers’homeworkstudyhardathomeeverynightusedtofightwithotherstudentsalwayshelpmyclassmates三、连词成句:使用句型,给每个句子加上主语如:Iusedtobefat,butnowI’mthin.Iusedto…,butnowI…二、列要点根据提示和要求列出英文要点过去(inthepast)现在(Now)IusedtobefatbutnowIamthinIusedtobequietbutnowIamoutgoingIusedtogetuplate,Iusedtobel
5、ateforclassbutnowIgetupearlytoreadEnglish,butnowIgettoschoolontimeIusedtotalkwithothersinclass,Ididn’tusetolistentotheteachersbutnowIlistentotheteachercarefullyandItakenoteseveryday.Ididn’tusetostudyatnight,Iusedtocopyothers’homeworkbutnowIstudyhardathomeeverynightIusedtofightwith
6、otherstudentsbutnowIalwayshelpmyclassmates四、连句成篇:加上开头结尾和连接词Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.First,Iusedtobefat,butnowIamthin.Second,Iusedtobequiet,butnowIamoutgoing………Ihavemadegreatprogress(取得了巨大的进步),andI’lltrymybesttobeabetterboy/girl.五、美化:尽量使用多种不同的句型和词语。注意扩写相关要点。Mylifehasch
7、angedalotinthelastfewyears.First,Iusedtobefat,butnowIamthin.BecauseIplaysportseveryday.Second,Iusedtobequiet,butnowIamoutgoing.Ihavemademanyfriends.………Ihavemadegreatprogress(取得了巨大的进步),andI’lltrymybesttobeabetterboy/girl.五、检查:先看字数是否达到要求,再通读全文,检查是否有人称、时态、单复数、拼写和搭配等错误Mylifehaschanged
8、alotinthelastfewyears.First,Iused