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1、作文评分标准2分—条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。5分—基本切题。表达思想不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。11分—切题。表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。14分—切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。字数不足应酌情扣分:PartOne背诵范文1.观点类作文对命运的两种看法自己的观点结论:命运掌握在自己的手中MyViewonFate(命运)·
2、Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewsonfate.Somepeoplethinkthatfateispredestined(注定)andnobodycanchangeit,whileothersarguethateverybodyisthemasterofhisfateandhecanchangeitwithhisownhands.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatteropinion.Foronething,Ifirmlybelieveallmenare
3、bornequalandnobodyisdestined(adj.注定的;命定的;去往…的·v.注定(destine的过去式和过去分词))toalwayssucceedorfailinhislife.Foranother,ifapersonisdiligent(adj.勤勉的;用功的,费尽心血的)anddetermined,hewillrealizehisdreamnomatterhowpoor,humbleorunluckyhemaybe.JustthinkofNobel,whoinventeddynamiteafter
4、countlessexperimentsduringwhichlosthisbrotherandgotseriouslyinjuredhimself.Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthatthereisnosuchthingasdestinedfateinourlife.Onlyifweholdontoourdreamcanweturnitintoreality,justasthesayinggoes,“Everyb
5、odyisthearchitectofhisownfortune.”2.利弊类家教的好处家教的坏处结论AdvantagesandDisadvantagesofFamilyTutoringRecentlymoreandmorepeoplebegintoengagefamilytutorsfortheirchildren.Theyarguethatfamilytutoringbringsseveraladvantages.First,familytutoringcanhelpweakstudentstokeepupwithot
6、hersinclass.Second,thesocietyisdevelopingatahighspeedandfamilytutoringcanhelpthechildmakepreparationsforthefuturecompetition.Familytutoringalsobringsmanyproblems.Firstly,studentsmaynotwelcomefamilytutoringatallbecausemanyofthemarealreadyoverburdened.Secondly,thequ
7、alityoftheteacherandteachingremainsapotentialproblem,asthemainaimofmosttutorsistoearnmoney.Finally,thestudentmaydependtoomuchonfamilytutoringandoverlooklearningatschool.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecanseeclearlythatthedisadvantagesaremoreobvious.Teachersandpare
8、ntsshouldhelpstudentsimproveefficiencybothinandoutofclass–experiencetellsusthatthebeststudentsneednofamilytutoring.3.办法类毕业生关注找工作问题找工作的三个解决办法总结HowtoGetaJ