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情感描写--吃惊惊讶
情感细节描写之“吃惊惊讶”形容词(adj.)副词(adv.)______________惊讶的;_______________感到吃惊的;______________令人惊讶的;________________令人惊讶的;______________令人惊讶地______________感到惊讶的;___________震惊的,震撼的;______________令人惊讶的;____________令人震惊的；________________惊人地，出乎意料地;___________________惊愕得张大嘴的；目瞪口呆的名词(n.)________________惊讶;_________________惊奇，惊讶;________________惊奇;_________________震惊动词(v.)_________使吃惊，使惊讶____________使惊奇，使惊愕amazedamazingastonishedastonishingamazinglysurprisedsurprisingsurprisinglyshockedshockingopen-mouthedamazementastonishmentsurpriseshocksurpriseamaze
固定短语1.令某人惊讶的是_____________________________________2.惊讶地______________________________________________3.难以置信地_____________________________脸上掠过惊讶1.___________________________________________脸上露出惊讶的表情=____________________________________________脸上露出惊讶的表情2.____________________________________________某人脸上露出惊讶的表情目瞪口呆1.__________________________________________惊讶地看着2.______________________________________目瞪口呆看着某人3.____________________________________某人惊讶得张口结舌4._________________________________________惊讶得张大嘴toone’samazement/astonishment/surprise/shockinamazement/astonishment/surprise/shockindisbeliefalookofsurprisespreadoverone’sfacealookofsurpriseflashedacrossone’sfacehavealookofsurpriseonone’sfacestare/lookat...insurprise/astonishmentlookatsb.withone’seyeswideopeninshockone’sjawdropped/felltothegroundone’smouthdrop/hangwideopeninsurprise
情感细节描写“惊讶”之声音、动作惊讶之声音1.惊奇的口气/声音______________________________2.吃惊地喊出声来__________________________3.惊讶得叫起来____________________________4.惊讶得说不出话来_________________________5.惊讶得倒抽一口气___________________________惊讶之动作1.呆住，惊呆__________________________________________________________________2.难以置信地摇头_____________________________3.使某人大吃一惊_____________________________4.晴天霹雷_________________________________atuneofsurprise=asurprisedtone/voicegiveacryofsurpriseletoutayelpofsurprisebeshockedbeyondwords=toosurprised/astonishedtoutteraword=bespeechlesswithshockgaspinastonishment/giveagaspofsurprisefreezewithshock/standstillwithshock/stopdeadwithshock/benumbwithshockshakeone’headindisbelieftakesb.aback/takeone’sbreathawaycomeasaboltfromtheblue
用面部表情+情感词汇，描写惊讶1._______________crossed/flashedacrossherface.他脸上掠过吃惊的表情。2.Hehad_______________________lookonhisface.他脸上有种惊讶略带迷惑的表情。3.Onedarkbrow______________.一道乌黑的眉毛惊奇地挑起。Alookofsurpriseasurprised,slightlypuzzledroseinsurprise
用“目瞪口呆、张口结舌、呆若木鸡”描写惊讶、吃惊4.Barbara’s____________________.芭芭拉惊讶得眼睛睁得圆圆的。5.ThemomentIopenedthebox,myeyes_______________.我一打开盒子，就惊奇地睁大了眼睛6.Weall________________him.我们惊奇地睁大眼睛看着他。7.Hestraightenedupandlookedatme,_____________.他直起身，目瞪口呆地看着我。8.We______________,and__________________.我们惊呆了，张口结舌。9.WhenIlookedatthegradeonmymathpaper,__________________________.(夸张)看到数学试卷成绩的那一刻，我惊得下巴掉在了地上。eyesroundedinsurprisewidenedinsurprisestaredwide-eyedatopen-mounthedfrozewithshockourmouthsfellopenmyjawdroppedtotheground
(声音)里透露出的惊讶(倒抽一口气，惊讶的说不出话)10.“Sotwoarecheaperthanone?”Alicesaid____________________,takingoutherpurse.爱丽丝拿出钱包，非常惊奇地说，“这么说，两个比一个更便宜？”11.Everyone___________________________asthecarscamearoundthelastbend.汽车转过最后一道弯道时，大人惊得倒吸了一口气。12.____________________________.我的声音里满是惊讶。13.Forafewmomentwestood________________.一时间我们站在那里惊讶得说不出话来。14.Hestaredattheburn-outcar_______________.他望着烧毁的汽车，吃惊得说不出话来。15.Hewas________________________oreventothink.我惊讶得说不出话来，甚至脑子都不灵了。inasurprisedvoice/tonegaspedinastonishment/surpriseAnoteofsurprisecoloredmyvoiceinshockedsilenceindumbdisbelieftoosurprisedtoutteraword
解III.按要求用吃惊的表达或其他描写补全下面句子，并背诵。Ipulledoutmylunchcontainerfrommybag.Iexpectedthemtoturnaway.______________________________(我的脸上掠过一丝惊讶)whenMarygrabbedasmallpieceoftofuandateit.__________________________(她惊讶地睁大眼睛).________________________________(随着她惊叫一声“这真好吃”,severalforksandspoonsreachedforthetofuinstantly.__________________________________(我目瞪口呆地看着他们)astheyweregoingonabouthowluckyIwasthatmymomtookthetimetoprepareacookedmealforme.WhileIdidn’tgettoeatanyofmymom’sfriedtofu,__________________________(但我满怀骄傲和感激).AlookofsurpriseflashedacrossmyfaceHereyeswidenedinsatonishmentWithhersurprisedcryof“Thisisdelicious”Igapedatthem/staredatthemwithwideeyesIwasfullofprideandgratitude
(2021高考真题)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISE(母亲节的惊喜)ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.
解Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.
解ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.
解注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.________________________________Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.__________________________________
解Step1:Readingforbasicelements.CharacterswhenwhereConflitProblemMainideaThemeJennaandJeff(twins),mother,fatherAt6.aminthemorningonMother’sDayInthekitchen,athomeThetwins(JennaandJeff)havetroubleinpreparingtheirlovebreakfast.Thetwinsplannedtomakebreakfastfortheirmotherandgaveherabigsurprise.Affection,warmth,love,laborhappiness
解Step2:Readingforplot.(development)TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.excited&confidentTheydecidedtoboiltheporriagefirst.TheymadetheFrenchtoast.Everythingwasgoingsmoothlytheporridgeboiledover.thestovewasamessnowJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandgaveacryofpain.Jennacaughtthesmellofburning,thebreadhadturnedblak.stayedcalmAsthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappoint-ment,theirfatherappeared.panicked&depressedThetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.
解Step3:Readingfordevelopment.Para1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.________________________________Para2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.__________________________________1.Howdidfatherfeelonseeingthemess?2.Whatdidfatherdotohelpthetwinspreparebreakfast?3.Whocookedthebreakfastatlast?1.Whatdidtheysay?2.Howdidmotherreactandfeel?3.sublimation（主题升华）
续写第一段(侧重描写动作和人物做早餐的场景)1.他把这锅粥放在文火上,让杰夫看着煮15分钟。①___________________________________________________________________________________________(双连动作)②Heputthepotofporridgeonagentleheat,___________________________________________________(非谓语动词作状语)2.看到他们失望的表情,他建议他们把厨房打扫干净,而他帮他们给妈妈做早餐。①He,andadvisedthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.②,headvisedthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.(非谓语动词作状语)3.很快厨房里弥漫着一股香味。____________________________________________4.双胞胎准备好早餐托盘,加上一张他们做的漂亮的卡片,走出厨房。Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,,andsteppedoutofthekitchen.(三连动词构成动作链)Heputthepotofporridgeonagentleheat,andaskedJefftowatchaskingJefftowatchoutforitgoingforfifteenminutes.sawtheirdisappointedfacesSeeingtheirdisappointedfacesSoon,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.addedabeautifulcardtheyhadmadeoutforitgoingforfifteenminutes.
续写第二段(侧重母亲看到早餐时的表情及场面神态和情感细节描写)5.当他们的母亲看到眼前完美的早餐时,她的脸上闪过一丝惊喜。Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,_______________________________________.(无灵主语句)6.空气中弥漫着诱人的早餐香味，她的目光落在早餐托盘上。_____________________________________,andhereyesfellonthebreakfasttray.7.她惊喜极了,于是兴奋地摇醒正在假装睡觉的父亲。①thatsheexcitedlyshookFather,whowaspretendingtobeasleep.(so...that...结果状语从句)②_________________________________________________________________________________(倒装句)8.他看到早餐时装出惊讶的样子。__________________________________________________________9.(满分结尾句)Jenna察觉到她父亲的目光，他们会意地眨了眨眼。Jennacaughtherfather’seyeandtheyexchanged________________.asparkofsurpriseflashedacrossherfaceAninvitingsmellofbreakfastfillingtheairThesurprisewassosweetSosweetwasthesurprisethatsheexcitedlyshookFather,whowaspretendingtobeasleep.Hefakedastonishmentwhenhesawthebreakfast.aknowingwink
Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Onelookandheknewwhattheywereupto.Seeingtheirdisappointedfaces,headvisedthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastformother.Thetwinsimmediatelycheeredupandgotdowntowork.Withinhalfanhour,thekitchenwascleaned.Atthesametime,FatherhadmadesomeFrenchtoastandgotthechickenporridgedone.Thenhetiptoedbacktobed.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttray,addingabeautifulcardtheyhadmade,andsteppedoutofthekitchen.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theycried“HappyMother’sDay!DearMummy!”Motherhuggedthetwins,sleepy-eyed.Aninvitingsmellofbreakfastfillingtheair,hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfasttray.SosweetwasthesurprisethatsheexcitedlyshookFather,whowaspretendingtobeasleep.Hefakedastonishmentwhenhesawthebreakfast.Motherbitintothetoast,sayingitwasthebestshehadevertasted.Jeffinstantlybeggedtohaveabite.Jennacaughtherfather’seyesandtheyexchangedaknowingwink.
解Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Father’sappearingwaslikeasaviortothetwochildren.Knowingwhathadhappened,insteadofscoldinghischildren,thefatherencouragedthemtocookbreakfastagain.Undertheirfather’sguidance,thekidsstartedtotryagainandeverythingwasgoingsmoothly.Whiletheywerefryingthebread,fatherhelpedthemadjustthefire,whichwasthekeytosuccess.Innotime,adeliciousbreakfaststartedtotakeshape.Wildwithjoy,theycouldn’twaittoletmomtastetheirhomemadebreakfast.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Whentheirmothersawthedeliciousandperfectbreakfastinfrontofher,shewasverysurprised.Awarmcurrentwelledupinherheart.Itwasnotonlythegift,buttheloveofthechildrenforherthatmovedherverymuch.Thechildrensaidloudly,“HappyMother’sDay!”Motherhuggedthemtightly,saying'Thankyousomuch,JeffandJenna.Ibelieveitwillbethebestbreakfastinmylife."Hearingthis,thetwinssmiledproudly.
当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。父亲的出现对两个孩子来说就像救世主一样。父亲知道发生了什么事，没有责备孩子们，而是鼓励他们再做早餐。在父亲的指导下，孩子们又开始尝试，一切都很顺利。在他们煎面包的时候，父亲帮他们调火，这是成功的关键。很快，一顿美味的早餐开始成形了。他们欣喜若狂，迫不及待地想让妈妈尝尝他们自制的早餐。双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了母亲。当他们的妈妈看到摆在她面前的美味而完美的早餐时，她非常惊讶。一股暖流涌上她的心头。感动她的不仅是礼物，还有孩子们对她的爱。孩子们大声说:“母亲节快乐!”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，说:“太谢谢你们了，杰夫和珍娜。我相信这将是我一生中最美味的早餐。”听到这些，双胞胎骄傲地笑了。
当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。他一眼就知道他们在干什么。看到他们失望的表情，他建议他们打扫厨房，自己帮他们给妈妈做早餐。这对双胞胎立刻振作起来，开始干活了。不到半小时，厨房就打扫干净了。与此同时，父亲做了一些法式吐司，并做好了鸡肉粥。然后他蹑手蹑脚地回到床上。双胞胎准备好早餐托盘，加上一张他们做的漂亮的卡片，然后走出厨房。双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了母亲。他们喊道:“母亲节快乐!”亲爱的妈妈!”母亲抱着双胞胎，睡眼惺忪。空气中弥漫着诱人的早餐香味，她的目光落在早餐托盘上。这个惊喜太甜蜜了，她兴奋地摇了摇假装睡着的父亲。当他看到早餐时，他假装惊讶。母亲咬了一口烤面包，说这是她吃过的最好吃的。杰夫立刻请求吃一口。詹娜和父亲对视了一下，他们会意地眨了眨眼。
