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1、考点10书面表达Writing1（2020·赣州市第一中学高三开学考试）你的英语老师布置了家庭作业。请按要求以做过的最有意义的事为题写一篇短文，内容包括：1.简介事情2.陈述意义注意：词数100左右【范文】AmeaningfulactivityInordertokeephealthyandgetclosetonature,ourcommunityorganizedanactivitycalled“Iwalk,andI’mfit”.MyparentsandIwenttotheForestParktogohikinglastSaturday.A
2、rrivingearlyinthemorning,wewaitedinlineattheregistrationplaceatabout8:00.Then,wegatheredatthestartingpoint,stretchingarmsandlegstoprepareourselvesforthecominglongdistancewalking.Soon,asignalwasgivenandoffwewentalongthewalkingroute,whichranaroundthepark.Somepeoplewalkedbris
3、kly,whileothersjusttooktheirtimetoenjoythefreshairandthebeautifulnaturalscenery.Aftermorethanonehour'swalking,wefinallyreachedthefinishline.The5kmjourneywaschallengingbutreallyenjoyable.wecheeredeachotherforoursuccess.Regularactivitieslikethisnotonlykeepusfit,butalsohelpge
4、tusclosertoeachotherandtonature.【解析】本书面表达是一篇记叙文。文章要求写一件发生的最有意义的事。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：记叙文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时为主，发表观点时用一般现在时。结构：总分总要求：1.说明活动目的2.介绍集合的时间、地点3.描写活动过程4.表达自己对此活动的感想第二步：列提纲（重点词组）Inorderto；keephealthy；gohiking；waitinline；stretcharmsandlegs；goalong；notonly…butalso…；keepsb.fit；
5、getsb.closeto第三步：连词成句1.Inordertokeephealthyandgetclosetonature,ourcommunityorganizedanactivitycalled“Iwalk,andI’mfit”.2.MyparentsandIwenttotheForestParktogohikinglastSaturday.3.Arrivingearlyinthemorning,wewaitedinlineattheregistrationplaceatabout8:00.4.Then,wegatheredatthe
6、startingpoint,stretchingarmsandlegstoprepareourselvesforthecominglongdistancewalking.5.Somepeoplewalkedbriskly,whileothersjusttooktheirtimetoenjoythefreshairandthebeautifulnaturalscenery.6.Aftermorethanonehour'swalking,wefinallyreachedthefinishline.7.Wecheeredeachotherforo
7、ursuccess.8.Regularactivitieslikethisnotonlykeepusfit,butalsohelpgetusclosertoeachotherandtonature.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态的问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermor
8、e,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Alth
