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1、大学英语四六级考试写作部分1Mymotherhaspassedalongtomecertainrulesforgettingalongwithothers.Don'targuewithparents;theywillthinkyoudon'tlovethem.Don'targuewithchildren;theywillthinkthemselvesvictimized.Don'targuewithspouses;theywillthinkyouareatiresomemate.Don'targuewithstrangers;theywil
2、lthinkyouarenotfriendly.Mymother'srules,infact,canbesummedupintwowords:Don'targue.2Ourlifetodaydependsverymuchonenergy.Intownsandinvillages,onfarmsandinfactories,machineshavemadelifeeasierthanitusedtobe.Themachinesuseenergy,andenergyisneededforheating,lighting,communication
3、s,carryinggoods--everything.Factoriesandindustrialplantsuseagreatdealofenergytomakethethingsthatweuseandbuyandsell.3(主题句)Noonecanavoidbeinginfluencedbyadvertisements.(推展句1)Muchaswemayprideourselvesonourgoodtaste,wearenolongerfreetochoosethethingswewant,foradvertisingexertsa
4、subtleinfluenceonus.(推展句2)Intheireffortstopersuadeustobuythisorthatproduct,advertisershavemadeaclosestudyofhumannatureandhaveclassifiedallourlittleweakness.4原句1:Hecanfixabicyclehimself.斜体部分应为主题句中的关键词。但它只是限制了段落发展的部分内容,并没有告诉读者该用哪种方法展开,是用因果关系法还是用分类法?修正:Hecanfixabicyclehimselfi
5、nseveralsimplesteps.修正:Thereareseveralreasonswhyhecanfixabicyclehimself.5原句2:Shetriestoimproveherlooks.斜体部分应为主题句中的关键词。她试着改变她面容的理由是什么?或者她采取什么方法来改善呢?我们无法从关键词中清楚得知。修正:Shetriesmanywaystoimproveherlooks.修正:Therearesomereasonswhyshetriestoimproveherlooks。6Therearetwowaysinwhichon
6、ecanownabook.Thefirstisthepropertyrightyouestablishbypayingforit,justasyouhavemadeitapartofyourselfandthebestwaytomakeyourselfapartofitisbywritinginit.Exerciseisbeneficialtoyourheart.A22-yearstudywasconductedbydoctorsinCalifornia.Theyfoundthatpeoplewhoworkatphysicaljobsexpe
7、riencefewerheartattacksthanotherpeople.Theseactivepeopleworkallthetimeatmoderatespeeds,theirdailyroutinegivesthemanadequateamountofexerciseandhelpsthemstayinshape.72017年12月大学英语六级作文开头写作方法比较法通过对过去、现在两种不同的倾向、观点的比较,引出文章要讨论的观点。[1]Foryears,...hadbeenviewedas....Butpeoplearetaking
8、afreshlooknow.Withthegrowing...,people....[2]Peopleusedtothinkthat...(Inthepast,..