The person I thank most 作文评.ppt

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1、ThepersonIthankmost作品评选集在你一生中肯定有你最感激的人，请以“ThepersonIthankmost”为题写一篇文章，要点如下：1.简单介绍你要感激的人（包括外貌、性格、爱好）2.你因什么事感激他（她）。3.这件事对你的影响。要求：所给要点要写全，语句通顺连贯，无语法错误，90词左右。TherearemanypeoplethatIwanttothank,butmyisthepersonIwanttothankmost.Hehasshortblackhair.Heisverykind.Helikestoplaybaske

2、tballandfootball.Healwayshelpsmetofinishmyhomework.IthankhimbecauseheusuallytakesdeliciousfoodtomewhenIstudyatschool.Itmakesmefeelhappyeveryday.Heoftentellsstoriesthatareinterestingtometomakemefeelrelaxed.IfIfailtheexam,heoftenencouragesmenottogiveup.MyfatheristhepersonIwa

3、nttothankmost.评语：对于父亲做的事情写得过于琐碎，没有集中于一件事情，并写清楚这一件事对于自己的影响。ByYangJunxiao【修改后】ByYangJunxiaoTherearemanypeoplethatIwanttothank,butmyisthepersonIwanttothankmost.Hehasshortblackhair.Heisverykindandeasytogetalongwith.Helikestoplaybasketballandfootball.Ithankhimbecausehealwayshel

4、psmewithmystudy.OnedayIfailedanexamandgothomesadly.Tomysurprise,hestudiedmypapercarefullyandthentaughtmehowtoworkouttheproblems.Iwasmovedbymyfather'sbehavior.FromthatdayIworkharderthanbeforeandmakegreaterprogress.Ifeelrelaxedwhilelearning.SomyfatheristhepersonIwanttothankm

5、ost.ByLiMengqiIwanttothankmymothermost.Ithankherforgivingbirthtomeandteachingmehowtobeanhonestperson.WhenIwasatinybaby,shespentallhertimewithme.WhenIwashungryortired,shecookedorgavemeahugatonce.WhenIwasill,sheworriedaboutmeanddidn'tsleepatnight.Inmyheart,mymotheristhemostb

6、eautifulpersonallovertheworld.Shehasblacklongstraighthairandtwobigeyes.Mymotherisverykindandfriendly.Shelikeswearingtheblackclothes.Sheprefersmusicthatisquietandsmooth.Shereallycaresaboutme.Iloveherverymuch.Ithankhermost.批语：内容很棒！写出了妈妈对于自己生活中的关爱，但文章的语序有所调整，细化某一件事会更棒！Iwantto

7、thankmymothermost.Shehasblacklongstraighthairandtwobigeyes.Mymotherisverykindandfriendly.Shelikeswearingtheblackclothes.Sheprefersmusicthatisquietandsmooth.IthankherforgivingbirthtomeShereallycaresaboutme.Oneday,Icaughtacoldandhadahighfever.Sheworriedaboutmeanddidn'tsleepa

8、tnight.Thosedaysshespentallhertimewithme.Igothealthyquickly.FromthethingIknewmymotherlove