高考英语写作实例

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1、描述你在学校的一次午餐，具体要求如下：(1)详细描述用餐的情况(2)简要表述你对这次午餐的感受这是一篇简单却需要挖掘的文章，因为如果只是描述用餐情况，显然缺乏深度，夸夸其谈,流于表面。学生拿到这样的题目需要仔细考虑用餐背后的东西。比较容易想到的话题是食物浪费、用餐卫生、餐桌礼仪等。在创作范文中，笔者另辟蹊径，通过大多数同龄人用餐时的匆忙来村托“我”的悠然自得，凸显出在紧张的高中学生生涯中，作者能够留有一片心灵净土,通过饮食來调节情绪，更好地面对挑战，表现出乐观的人生态度。此文结构简单，文笔清新,语

2、言精准，并运用了高中阶段常见的语法结构，不失为一个很好的作文模板，供学生借鉴。Theinstantthebellindicatingtheendofthelastclassrang,outoftheclassroompouredallstudentsbutone.Unlikemypeers,Iwasinnohurrytomakearunfortheschoolcanteen,torushthroughlunchandtoreturntotheclassroomforhomework.Iarrive

3、datthecanteenwhenamassivequeuehadformed.Waitingformyturnpatiently,Ismelledthearomaoftheappetizingfood.Greasyassomedishesmightbe,thewiderangeoffoodpreparedbytheschoolwassuperiorinnutritionalvaluetothatfoundelsewhere.Thetypicalscheduleofahigh-schooleris

4、extraordinarilyhecticandthuslunchbreakisararetimewhenoverworkedstudentscanwinddownandenjoythepleasureprovidedbytheflavorfulfood.Imakeitapointtopampermytastebudsbysavoringeverylittlebitoftasteinfood.WhatIusuallyliketodooverlunchishaveamindlessconversat

5、ionwithacoupleofstudentswhohavealsolearnttosmelltherosesalongthebone-breakingjourneythroughhighschool.Weroundedoffourlunchwithadessert,refreshedandsatisfied.Cometothinkofit,itisnotthefoodbutmyattitudetowardslifethataffordsmepleasureandempowersmeinfaci

6、nguptovariouschallenges.(219words)语法解构现在分词作定语thebellindicatingtheendofthelastclassrang倒装句(1)outoftheclassroompouredallstudentsbutone(2)Greasyassomedishesmightbe不定式Iwasinnohurrytomakearunfortheschoolcanteen状语从句Iarrivedatthecanteenwhenamassivequeuehadfo

7、rmed・现在分词作状语Waitingformyturnpatiently,过去分词作状语thewiderangeoffoodpreparedbytheschoolwassuperior代词用法(1)thewiderangeoffoodpreparedbytheschoolwassuperiorinnutritionalvaluetothatfoundelsewhere・(2)enjoythepleasureprovidedbytheflavorfulfood并列句Thetypicalschedu

8、leofahigh-schoolerisextraordinarilyhecticandthuslunchbreakisararetime定语从句(1)thuslunchbreakisararetimewhenoverworkedstudentscanwinddown(2)acoupleofstudentswhohavealsolearnttosmelltheroses主语从句WhatIusuallyliketodooverlunchishaveamindlessconversat