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1、Asisshownabove,onthelakefloatsaboat,onwhichonecoupleoftouristsarethrowingwasteintothelake,whichhasbeeninamessandfullofvariouswastesincludinglunchboxes,fishboneanditslike.Therehasbeenaheateddiscussionabouttheproblemthepicturecarriesinthenewspaperrecently.Thepicture,atthefirstg
2、limpse,seemstobesimple,butonlyapenetratingsightcanpiercethroughitsuperficialmeaning.Thepicturetellsusthatnothingcanbecomparedwithenvironmentprotection.Nobady(拼写错误Nobody)darefailtoattachdueattentionto(给予了适当的注意。)Thesignificanceofenvironmentprotection(建议使用:environmentalprotectio
3、n).Tobeginwith,environmentprotection(protectingenvironment)canbringusacomfortableatmosphere.Additionally,itputsoursocietyinharmoniousposition,promotingmutualunderstanding,enhancingfriendlytiesandshorteningthegapbetweenpeople.Consequently,theconflictsandtensionscouldberelieved
4、bydoingso.Weretherenoenvironmentprotection(建议使用:Wereindifferenttothedestructionofenvironment),hardlycanwetastethewonderofourlife.Tosolvethisburningproblem,itisimperativeforpeopletoattachattentionto(建议使用:pourfocuson)thesignificanceofenvironmentprotection.Moreover,thegeneralpub
5、licissupposedtoenhancetheirawarenessthatenvironmentprotectionplayacrucialroleinourlife.Inbrief,onlyinareasonable,prosperousandhealthyatmospherecanwehopetowitnesstheidealsceneinwhichpeoplecanenjoytheirlifetotheuttermost.点评:以上作文系vip作文班学员所写(cet6——608分,某985重点高校学生),总体来讲,此作文得分在14分左
6、右。不足之处:(1)environmentprotection一词出现频率过高,建议用其他词予以代替,比如:protectingenvironment,environmentalprotection.(2)Nobady拼写错误应改为:Nobody,一篇高分作文可能因为某个简单的单词拼写错误,而给阅卷老师留下不好的印象。(3)Thepicture使用频率过高,建议使用cartoon,image,picture,drawing等。2012年考研英语作文预测(仅供参考)大作文:(1)正面(正确、积极的):01、02、03、08、10反面(不正确的做法、
7、消极):04、05、06、07、09、11(2)一幅图还是两幅图(04、06)(3)作文有无规定题目(仅02)(4)1st:描述图画,2nd:解释图画要表达的含义,3rd:严重性及采取的举措。例如:2011环境污染;2010:一个火锅——多种文化*2012重点预测正面小作文:重点书信