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作文，我爱你，我要抓住你！ 高考英语写作方法1.基本策略2.基本句型 高考英语写作方法高分策略 高考英语写作高分策略以前英语作文评分依据是根据要点和语言准确度而定，但近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档(21～25分)。 高考英语写作方法高分策略1.遣词2.造句3.谋篇 一.遣词突然比如说大多数…有助于…努力去…就我来说越来越多的人…suddenlyforexamplemostof…behelpfulto..tryto…inmyopinionmoreandmorepeople…allofasuddenforinstancethemajorityof…contributetomakeeffortsto..asfarasI’mconcernedanincreasingnumberofpeople….强化“复杂、高级”的概念 一.遣词使用高级词汇和短语强化“复杂、高级”的概念1.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采e.g.［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［亮点］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown. 一.遣词强化“复杂、高级”的概念2.使用一些很有“洋味”的单词1)Thankyouforspendingthetimewithus.2)Thewayhelooksattheworldisverypractical.使用高级词汇和短语sharingviews 一.遣词使用高级词汇和短语强化“复杂、高级”的概念3.避免重复使用某一单词或短语［原文］IlikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingTV.［亮点］IlikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingTV. 二.造句句式多变，语法活用，增加亮点造句的原则：句式多变，语法活用。句子是表达一个完整意思的最小单位，所以造句能力在英文写作中是非常重要的。好的英语句子能够生动，形象，准确的表达内容。所以要想写出漂亮的书面表达，必须从写好句子开始。 二.造句句式多变，语法活用，增加亮点1.改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首。e.g.Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.亮点Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether. 二.造句2.使用比喻、暗喻等修辞手法1.这些天他很忙。Heisverybusythesedays.Heisasbusyasabeethesedays.2.那个小女孩骄傲得很。Thelittleisveryproud.Thelittleisasproudasapeacock. 二.造句3.使用谚语、格言等1.凡事都是一分为二。Everycoinhastwosides.2.万事开头难。Everybeginningisdifficult.3.活到老学到老。Amanisnevertoooldtolearn. 二.造句4.使用复杂句式（强调句）e.g.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.Ithadsavedmysisterbravely.MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasAhFuwhohadsavedmysisterbravely.e.g.Hedidn’trealizetheimportanceoflearningEnglishuntilthen.ItwasnotuntilthenthatherealizedtheimportanceoflearningEnglish. 二.造句4.使用复杂句式（强调句）e.g.1.就是因为天气不好，这场足球赛才不得不被延期.（2003上海春季30题）Itwasbecauseofbadweatherthatthefootballmatchhadtobeputoff.e.g.正是在当地导游的帮助下，这名登山者才得以获救。（2004上海37题）Itwasonlywiththehelpofthelocalguidethatthemountainclimberwasrescued. 二.造句5.使用复杂句式（倒装句）Youcanhopetomakeimprovementinoperatingsystemonlyinthisway.Onlyinthiswaycanyouhopetomakeimprovementinoperatingsystem.（2003上海春季39题）e.g. 二.造句5.使用复杂句式（倒装句）e.g.只有当你的身份被核实后你才能允许进去(身份：identity).（2003上海38）Onlywhenyouridentityhasbeencheckedwillyoubeallowedin.e.g.在昨天的聚会上她一首歌都没唱。Notasinglesongdidshesingatyesterday’sparty.（2000上海25） 二.造句6.使用非谓语动词（现在分词）Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.e.g.Onhearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying. 二.造句6.使用非谓语动词（现在分词）e.g.1.Astheriverhassufferedsuchheavypollutionalready,itmaynowbetoolatetocleanuptheriver.（NMET200130题）Havingsufferedsuchheavypollutionalready,itmaynowbetoolatetocleanuptheriver. 二.造句6.使用非谓语动词（现在分词）e.g.他们有说有笑地走进了大厅。Theywalkedintothehall,talkingandlaughing.e.g.他又迟到了，让老师感到非常恼火。Hewaslateagain,makingtheteacherveryangry. 二.造句7.使用非谓语动词（过去分词）Hewassatisfiedwiththeresultandhedecidedtogoonwiththeexperiment.Satisfiedwiththeresult,hedecidedtotogoonwiththeexperiment.e.g. 二.造句7.使用非谓语动词（过去分词）e.g.如果给他时间，他就会成为一流的网球运动员。（2003北京28）Giventime,he’llmakeafirst-classtennisplayer.e.g.同学们被李柏榆老师的故事深深感动了，下决心更加好好学习。DeeplymovedbyMrLi’sstory,thestudentsmadeuptheirmindstostudyharder. 二.造句8.使用复杂句式（定语从句)e.g.Luckilywe’dbroughtaroadmap.Withoutitwewouldhavelostourway.（2004北京春季23）Luckilywe’dbroughtaroadmapwithoutwhichwewouldhavelostourway. 二.造句使用复杂句式（定语从句)e.g.我们将被带领着参观了这座城市：学校、博物馆和其他一些游人很少去的地方。（2002NMET北京22）Wewillbeshownaroundthecity:schools,museumsandsomeotherplaces,wherevisitorsseldomgo. 二.造句10.使用由what引导的从句，“所..”.e.g.wehadtostandtheretocatchtheoffender.Whatwehadtodowas(to)standthere,tryingtocatchtheoffender.WhatChinahasachievedinrecentyearsisknownthroughtheworld. 二.造句11.使用分句和长句，增加表现力e.g.Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess. 三.谋篇谋篇的原则：满分作文都有个共性就是有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。文章的连贯性和紧凑感是很重要的。句子作为最小的表达意思的语言单位如果只是被随意的整合，是无法达到有效表达的目的。 三.谋篇使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺1.表示递进:thenbesidesfurthermoremoreoverwhat’smoreworsestill然后还有而且此外此外更糟糕的是 三.谋篇使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺2.表示转折:howeverbutonthecontraryafterall然而但是相反毕竟 三.谋篇使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺3.表示总结:finallyatlastinbriefinawordinshortallinallinconclusion最后最后总之总之简而言之总而言之最后 三.谋篇使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺4.表示强调:indeedcertainlysurelyaboveall确实一定肯定尤其 三.谋篇使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺5.表示对比:inthesamewayjustasontheonehand…ontheotherhandforonething,foranother同样正如一方面…另一方面一方面…另一方面 Practicemakesperfect熟能生巧 大量积累，你就不会觉得词到用时方恨少! 习作点评 典型问题 审题Thetopicshouldbe:Theadvantagesanddisadvantagesofcommunicatingbytelephoneorbeletter. 2.整体结构Threeorfourparts:TopicAdvantagesDisadvantagesSummary 3.重视单词拼写、大小写及标点符号Aswearestudens,Telephoneismuchfasterforus.Whenisschool,wecanuseatelephonetocommunicatewithourparentsandourfriends,itismoreconvient.Ontheotherhand,Telephoneisalsoawallthataffectsourcommunicate.Today,someofusthinkwrittenaletterisamoretroublething,but… 注意以下单词:means&meancommunication,communicate,communicatingwriting&writtenconvenient&convenience,health&healthyfeel&fellsometimes&sometimetime× 注意以下的短语：Ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…onthecontrarykeep/stayintouchwith…makeatelephonecall/writealetteratalltime总是atalltimes一直 4.句子表达一个句子出现多个谓语或者没有谓语Weusetelephoneisveryconvenient.Sometimeswearesowanttospeaklotsthatwecan’tcontrolthetime.Whenyourparentsreceiveyourletter,theywillveryhappy.Telephoneisstandforfashion.Mostofusareknowthatthemobilephonehasbeenapartofourlivessincethe1980s. 2.表达中文化Writingletterscanpractiseourwriting.Nomatteryourfriendsgowhere,wecanfindthemquickly.Butitmustwaitforalongtimethatyourfriendwillwriteback.Italsomakesuscontactwithourfamilyandfriendsfacetofaceincrease. 3.主语不明确或者乱换主语Telephonecantalkwithothersquicklyanduselesstime.Lettercanexpressourselvesandwhatwewanttosay.Nomatteryourfriendsgowhere,wecanfindthemquickly.Letterspendslittlemoneyifyourdistanceisverylonganditcanexpressyourfeelingbetterwhenyouhavesomethingdifficulttosay. JointhetwosentencesItwillbealongtimebeforeyouhearfromsomeone.Thatisadisadvantage(that/which)theletterhas.Itwillbealongtimebeforeyouhearfromsomeone,whichisadisadvantagetheletterhas. 4.字迹工整，卷面整洁，用黑色水笔书写 佳作欣赏 Telephoneorletter---By刘小庆Communicationisveryimportantbothinthepastandatpresent,andittendstobemoreessentialnowadays.Telephoneandletteraretwomainmeansofcommunication;theybothhaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.Telephonesaretheresultofthedevelopmentoftechnology.Theobviousadvantageisfastandhandy.Withinafewseconds,youcanhear thefamiliarvoicecomeup,socantheonewhoyoutalkwithdirectlyandnaturally.Wheneveryouwanttocommunicate,youneedn’tworryaboutthetimeandplaces.Writinglettersisatraditionalwayofcommunication.Thus,itisanapproachyoucantalksincerelyanddeeply.Youcanspeakoutthewordsthatyouareembarrassedto saydirectlyanditismoreusefultostrengthenyourfriendship.Butitcomesmoreslowly.Inmyopinion,we’dbettercombinethesetwowaystomakeourcommunicationbetter. 发散拓展 根据下面表格所列内容，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，简述乘飞机和火车的利和弊及你的观点。短文应包括表中所列的全部内容，标题与文章第一句已给出，不计入总词数。以从青岛到广州为例：交通工具飞机火车价格900元250元旅行时间2小时58小时优点省时、舒适、便于休息便宜、可以观关缺点昂贵耗时、拥挤、不利休息 TrainTravelandAirTravelAirtravelhastwoadvantagesovertraintravel.Firstly,itcansavemuchtime.WecanflyfromQingdaotoGuangzhouinjusttwohours,butbytrainittakes58hoursormore.Secondly,airtravelismorecomfortablebecausetheplanefliessosmoothlythatwecanrestwellduringthetrip,whilethetrainissometimescrowdedandpassengershavetositforalongtime,whichmakesustired. However,traintravelalsohasitsownadvantages.Forexample,travelingbytraincostsonly250yuanfromQingdaotoGuangzhouwhiletravelingbyairwillcost900yuan.Besides,throughthetrain’swindow,wecanenjoythebeautifulscenesoutsidethetrain.SoIthinkdifferentpeoplelikedifferentwaysoftraveling. 一位中学生在自己班级就校服问题进行了调查，下面是对部分学生调查统计表，请参照该表写一篇题为”ReportontheSurveyaboutOurSchoolUniform”的报告。注意：1、报告必须包括调查表中的主要内容,可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯。2、词数100左右。生词：followthefashion GroupsOpinionsPercentageReasonsAlike60很帅,颜色很好表明是学生，整洁平等，不赶时髦Bdislike30不舒服颜色不好不好看，太过时样式单调CNoidea10 Ididasurveyaboutourschooluniform.Wehavedifferentopinionsonthismatter.3.Opinionsaredividedonthismatter.3.Everycoinhasitstwosides.4.Ithasboththeadvantagesanddisadvantages.5.Therearemanyadvantagesanddisadvantagesin….First…,Second… About70%of…/Mostofus/Themajorityofusthink…Some…others…However,about30%…Ontheonehand,ontheotherhandOnthecontraryBesides…What’smore…Inmyopinion/asfarasI’mconcerned ReportontheSurveyaboutOurSchoolUniformIdidasurveyaboutourschooluniform.Iaskedsomeofmyclassmateswhattheythoughtaboutouruniform.Themajority/60%ofthemlikeit.Somesayitisveryfashionableandthecolorisnice.Othersthinkitisneatandtidyandasymbolforstudents.Insomestudents’opinion,whenwewearourschooluniform,wefeelequalandnoneedtofollowthefashion. Other30%ofmyclassmatesdon’tliketheschooluniform.Someofthemfeelitisuncomfortableandthecoloristoodull.Someconsideritold-fashioned.Intheeyesofothers,itsstyleisverysimple.Therestofthemhavenoideaaboutit. 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票：entrancefee DearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks. DearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.60%ofthestudentsareagainsttheideaofentrancefees.Theybelievedapublicparkshouldbefreeofcharge.Peopleneedaplacewheretheycanrestandenjoythemselves. Chargingentrancefeeswillnodoubtkeepsomepeopleaway.Whatismore,itwillbecomenecessarytobuildgatesandwalls,whichwilldoharmtotheappearanceofacity.Ontheotherhand,40%thinkthatfeesshouldbechargedbecauseyouneedmoneytopaygardenersandotherworkersandtobuyplantsandyoungtrees.Theysuggest,however,feesshouldbechargedlow.Yours,LiHua